Reviews For Downtrodden
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Reviewer: grantb33 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 13 2018 9:59 AM Title: Bios

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Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 9:25 AM Title: Bios

All I have to say is that this story was a very great read. From the characters in the story, to the types of situations the character were put in. The time spent reading this was well worth with. I also can't wait for you to work on that second story you mentioned.



Author's Response:

I will, once I get some time to write stuff but I WILL write more stories in this universe, that is a promise!

Reviewer: greggy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2016 9:05 PM Title: Bios

Hope to see these characters continued in another story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I have a few ideas on how to continue it so you may get your wish :) 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 5:22 PM Title: Bios

Great Story! Can't wait to see what's next! The teaser at the end was great!

Any word on if the other story by that other author (familyman I think their name was?) will be finished?

Author's Response:

Thanks and I'm sorry to say I think that story is dead. Neither vgiv nor I have been able to contact the guy for over a year now so its safe to say its gone for now. No worries though, we're still around to write more stories for the series. 

Reviewer: goku321 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2016 12:11 PM Title: Bios

Really awesome story! Really love the plot development in the story!

Not tryin to sound like a perv but is there going to be future foot action in upcoming chapters, possibly
some foot action involving Wendy?

Author's Response:

I am glad to hear you liked it, its was my first scene involving feet! 

I'll only say that with only one chapter left, there won't be any feet scenes in this story. Maybe in future stories, perhaps with Wendy or even with other characters. 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2016 7:24 AM Title: Bios

Loosely connected? I'm surprised because a incident at FDR High School was  also mentioned in the last chapter of "Incorporated" so... I guess we'll find out in next chapter of this story!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

A little spoiler:

 

The incident there takes place after Downtrodden in another story. vgiv will be writing it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 11:53 AM Title: Bios

Good chapter. I don't think that a nurse was needed Cassie could've do nursing on Alvin.

PS: Are your stories in this universe connected to each other.?



Author's Response:

Thank you! Well safety first, don't want Alvin getting out and actually having  more serious injuries. Cassie would be good at mouth to mouth though....

Loosely connected, Downtrodden has a small connection to vgiv's Incorporated. Alvin's stepmother worked at the same company Linda did. 

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2015 7:18 AM Title: Bios

I think I misread it. It's actually Alvin's sister who is talking, like you just pointed out. Thank you for clarifying that. I will send you an e-mail with the next chapter so far and the limtied bios I have. I needed a bit of practise before I went ahead with the story about Tobias and Fluer, so I went ahead and did a few simple renders of a short story inspired by a link (to a comic) someone posted on Giantess City, which I can also send you for being a valued reader.



Author's Response:

No problem, I'll make sure to make things clearer in the future. 

I would love to see the renders, excitedly waiting for your email :D

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2015 12:09 PM Title: Bios

@Nostory: Didn't you say you'd possibly have another multi sized world story after downtrodden?

Plus, Is the third story by that other author in the "Incorperated/Downtrodden universe" ever going to get written?

Author's Response:

Oh its not a possibility, it is definitely happening and it is in my personal opinion, a very complex story for me as a writer to attempt. It'll feature a protaganist that's different from the ones currently in my stories, she(Or he, the character I'll focus on may be different in the final version.) However be prepared to wait as I want to write some other stories before it happens. 

He'a currently MIA :/ ,I'll get back to you on it when there's news. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 9:12 AM Title: Bios

There is just no hope for people like Patricia. There is no cure. Too bad Cassie couldn't flush her down the toilet without consequenses. Alvin is almost free from that house.

 



Author's Response:

This isn't that kind of story and I think Cassie is risking a lot already by even threatening that, any further and she'd go to jail for a long time. Alvin doesn't need to be free from it, just redecorate it and give it a regime change.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 4:24 AM Title: Bios

Titans must feel so akward, because there are so few of them and they stand out. That must give an uncomfortable feeling. At the same time it must feel strange to be so big and strong. Do they realise that they are never in physical danger like normal people. No animal, car accident, train accident, collapsing building can hurt them. Mountains look like hills to them. Their perception of the world is so much different than normal people. The Titans who travel with normals somewhere must often forget how dangerous the world is to normal humans. I like this strange Titan world and like to know more about it.

About this chapter. Patricia is just being horrible again. It would be funny when Cassie confronts Patricia



Author's Response:

Titans in the US are kind of a minority but there are countries out there where Titans are the majority. Most of the Middle East consists of Titan women and their normal sized men. Its less strange than you think though, the first generation would have been strange since they were the true giants of the world but now its just an everyday thing, nothing too special. They can be hurt by trains, Titan trains do exists and there are buildings capable of hurting them if it collapsed. Most Titans undergo mandatory training , where they learn how to be around the other sizes and how dangerous it is to them if they aren't careful.

 

You'll learn more about this world in future stories , I guarentee it. The world you're seeing in the stories released so far is only a glimpse , not a true representation of it. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 10:46 PM Title: Bios

Vgiv's review brings up a good point. Cassie could have easily mushed someone while not paying attention to her surroundings. Do Titans share hallways with Normals and Amazons? Thats like an accident waiting to happen! At 1265 tons, Cassie could obliterate a Normal underfoot without even noticing!



Author's Response:

Titans occupy their own wing of the school and have their own classes although their teachers may be of a different size than them. There is nothing to really stop Normals and Amazons from ever using Titan hallways although they are strongly advised to use their own and only move on to a Titan one if there is a need to do so. Accidents do happen and its usually negligence on both parties but they are rare these days unlike in the past when society was still trying to deal with the 3 sizes and not always in a good way. 

 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 10:06 PM Title: Bios

Cassie not watching where she's going? Someone at TETS felt a disturbance.

Not the 200th reviewer, sadly. Eh, I'll shoot for 300th. 



Author's Response:

300 may take a very long time but maybe 250?

 

A Titan can't always look out , but nothing happened but if Patricia got squished most people would probably keep her shoe as a memento, put it up on a pedestel or something.

 

 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 11:45 PM Title: Bios

No Osama is a little worse than Patricia. ;) Patricia wants to steal money from her children. When someone steals from their children to satisfy an addiction as if it is the most normal thing in the world, than they are truly lost. She clearly doesn't want children, but pure slaves where she has to put as little effort into loving them as possible. Not a shred of guilt or shame for her actions.

 



Author's Response:

 I might have overstated there but both are horrible people .Patricia definitely feels no remorse or she would be looking for him ,even before the money reveal.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 1:45 AM Title: Bios

I have accepted Wendy as a somewhat human being. But you can never make me like Patricia. What a terrible selfish human being.



Author's Response:

Wendy will be touched by it but I think it will be easier to make you like Osama than see the same in Patricia. 

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 7:59 PM Title: Bios

Oops. Realized that I had written "Uptown Funk" on my previous review. I meant ot write "Uptown Girl." My bad.

I've been listening to too much pop music.



Author's Response:

One is a Billy Joel song and the other has Bruno Mars, easy mistake XD

Reviewer: vgiv Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2015 11:09 PM Title: Bios

I think a paragraph cuts. When Wendy is upset and the couple with the Chihuahua is frightened the paragraph just abruptly ends with 'and' with no period. No idea if the copy paste failed, or the script just malfunctioned.

 



Author's Response:

I forgot to add something there, thanks for pointing it out. Was supposed to have a couple of words at the end. 

Reviewer: vgiv Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2015 2:57 AM Title: Bios

Since I love video game references...

I used to live with you... then I took a bitchy mom to the knee.

Eh needs work. My jokes not the chapter. Speaking of which, to avoid lenghty waits between updates, if I don't respond to any of your emails within a day, 24 hours, just post the chapter without my reply from now on. Besides, if there is anything series breaking, lore shattering or huge errors of some sort, I am positive a simple edit or a reviewer will let you know before I could. You know the series well enough to not make mistakes casually.

By the way, why is there a big gap at the end of the chapter?



Author's Response:

I kind of already made it my back up plan in the event you didn't respond. 

I have no idea though, let me fix it. 

Reviewer: Julianz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2015 7:04 AM Title: Bios

This is a really great story! I like the character development and how the story has come out so far. I wonder if any of Wendy's friends will take Alvin though. Or if Alvin will forgive any of Wendy's friends, since they were tools used by Wendy in his past torture. Also, something tells me she is actually changing, for the good at least. Great story!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I was just reading yours when I decided to check mine. 

Yeah I'm hoping Wendy's friends will take him because there isn't anyone else she knows who could do that for them. If Alvin can forgive Wendy, I think her friends ought to be easier. It's also nice to see someone who believes Wendy is sincere about her change. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 9:40 PM Title: Bios

Sorry if I made it confusing, I meant to say that in the chapter, it's shown as "Wendy" not "Patricia" but shouldn't it be Patricia? I changed it in my first review to reflect that but that made it seem like it was okay to begin with.

 

“You can come out from behind the couch; I’m still hungry,” Wendy said from the corner of her mouth.

 

 

 “Look, she’s your daughter,” Alvin stepped in as he heard the slamming of a door. He swallowed, unable to imagine what Wendy had to be going through.

 

“ She wasn’t behaving like one. I’ll give you...” Wendy took her phone out from the back of her shorts and glanced at the digital clock face.



Author's Response:

Oh ok, I see what you mean! Sorry, I'll go correct it now.

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