Date: January 06 2015 12:57 PM Title: Dolls
This is story didn't go in the direction I was expecting. Yeah, I'm (kind of) back. Guess the urge to read good stories became too strong to stay away permenatly as it's easy enough to dismiss ones I don't like. I can't see myself uploading any new ones to my account here though. And plus, I've barely written declared I was leaving, back in June of 2014.
Anyhow, I was expecting Cassie be nice to Alvin from the start. Well, half-expecting that is. Secondly, I did not expect her to have a doll house in her room. She is an unexpected character and I'm still trying to 'get my head around' how she miscontrue Alvin's being tied up as him being a pervent. Surely his predicament would be obvious? Maybe I wasn't pay enough attention.
I am quite eager to keep reading, actually, so I'll keep this review stort. Basically, I like how this story has surprised me. That's all I got for now. Have a nice day!
Author's Response:
Thanks for it and I'll say that Cassie having a dollhouse would be for nostalgic reasons from her childhood, that's the reason for it. It's also great to see you back on the site and I hope you stick around.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2014 4:04 PM Title: Dolls
Oooooohhhh boy
Here we go with alvin gearing his revenge buttons!!!
Author's Response:
I hope you're right.
Date: September 26 2014 12:16 PM Title: Dolls
I'd like to point out that Cassie probably would not have been so harsh if she had not been called a ho earlier.
Author's Response:
She's had a bad day, we'll give her that one. Good news is that at least Cassie knows Alvin is innocent.
Date: September 26 2014 7:54 AM Title: Dolls
Im no sure if I like Cassie, even now...First of all she completely jumped the gun! And secondly, EVEN if Alvin had been there for perverted reasons I dont think he would have deserved what he got!
I really dont think looking up a girls skirt = kidnapping and torture. I think she'll grow on me, but Im not too impressed by her 180 AFTER she already broke a guys spirit for such a petty reason.
Author's Response:
I can understand where you're coming from, I really do. I honestly think very little of perverts, they generally get what they deserve. Cassie has her reasons for doing that, it'll eventually be revealed as the story goes by. Give Cassie time, you might actually like her.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2014 6:43 AM Title: Dolls
Woot! Cassie isn't such a bad person after all. I'm glad she had a change of heart. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks, I don't think she'd ever do any of what she did to someone she knew was innocent. Once Alvin broke down and it became clear he never wanted to look up her skirt, she made a 180 and moved to help him.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2014 1:43 AM Title: Dolls
Great chapter. Sucks being Alvin, but I can only assume he has hit rock bottom now. So I guess things are looking up?
Author's Response:
When you're at rock bottom, the only direction is up. It definitely sucks being him right now, I would not trade it for all the giantesses in the world.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2014 11:16 PM Title: Dolls
Wow, that chapter was a emotional roller coaster. Perfect nice a long chapter, with perfect editing.
Author's Response:
The previous three weren't long but when I get the inspiration, hitting the 4k mark is not difficult at all. Glad you liked it and how the story appears to be living up to the hype so far.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2014 10:37 PM Title: Dolls
I have to admit, at first I was extremely pissed off at Cassie. I'm pretty sure what she just did is a crime on several levels, or at least should be.
Speaking of which, why is there a group advocating for women's rights? Seems to me like the women in this world need the least amount of help.
But in the end everything came together perfectly. Alvin had a mental breakdown and Cassie recieved the full force of his rage, something she probably needed. Maybe now she'll just stick to giving jerks a stern talking to instead of a good 'ol fashioned kidnapping. The beautiful thing was his rage felt very real and natural, and Cassie didn't know how to handle it which also felt real.
Now I'm wondering what's going to happen to Wendy.
Author's Response:
It probably is, the pain she inflicted on those boys but I think it's too early to judge Cassie, this is only the second chapter she's been around.
I thought the punishments might have across as too cheesy or even over the top but I am glad to see that you liked how it all came together. Alvin is no jerk and trust me, there'll be ample opportunity to look at Cassie's former boyfriends. I am impressed that the rage came across as real and natural, I was really worried it wouldn't even feel real at all.
Wendy? You'll find out soon.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2014 9:08 PM Title: Dolls
This was an amazing chapter once again!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank, just hoping that Alvin makes it out sane.