[Report This]Date: November 27 2014 11:06 PM Title: Over Here, Caroline!
I'm curious to see what hazards might be provoked from Caroline in chapter 13! Though I'm also curious to see just how long the gentle Cassandra will let a tiny walk all over her. :]
This is an awesome idea for a story structure, though I would imagine it must be very burdening to keep up with every route-- especially since the site doesn't really have convenient support for multiple story paths.
Despite that burden the story is still progressing at a pace that holds my interest, great work! I look forward to reading any and all updates!
Author's Response:
Is it that obvious that Chapter 13 won't end well? XD I guess I could have made it a bit more subtle.
Oh, you may be surprised as to how long someone with already low self-esteem will be willing to take abuse. A couple of Cassandra's sub-routes are pretty major reversals.
You have no idea. In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed the way I set everything up. Regarding the site, I have worked with less user-friendly setups before (I was on silentspring before it shut down), so it doesn't really bother me.
This is going to take forever to get to some of my personal favorite route ends, and the Golden Ending is far off in the distance, but it will be a fun ride. Hope you keep your seat.
Date: November 22 2014 8:14 PM Title: Over Here, Caroline!
Seriously, More Caroline!
Suggestions: If you do accuse one of them, maybe have a brief struggle in which you get accidentally crushed. Maybe Catherine (is she the musical one?) wants to give you a 'try,' and Caroline says no, because she'd rather fix you than wait for another one (simply because it's faster, not because she cares, obviously,) and something happens. I dunno.
But if you want just general bad endings?
You get stuck as Catherine's 'mini slave/sex-slave' forever.
Caroline eats you FOR PROTEIN! (Probably not that one...)
Cassandra accidentally misplaces you among all your stuff and she accidentally crushes you, or never finds you again, and you starve.
Good Endings:
You get stuck as CAROLINE's mini slave/sex-slave forever.
Cassandra treats you like a prized possesion, and shows you off to the world. Scientists study you (non-lethally, though lethally could be a bad ending,) tryine either to replicate or reverse the process.
Candace comes home, and is incredibly hot and cool, and you get stuck as HER mini slave/sex-slave forever.
Can't think up a good one for Catherine, sorry!
Good luck, and keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Seems someone likes Caroline. XD
In order of their canonical ages: Candace is the absent sister- a blonde-haired, brown-eyed business woman, who enjoys being a troll. Cassandra is our red-haired, green-eyed little nerdlet, who is the nicest to you by far. Catherine is our raven-haired, violet-eyed musician, who is a bit of a sadist (and only knows how to show affection through sex, but that's neither here nor there). Caroline, of course, is our brunette with the icy blue eyes and a passion for sports.
In order: already wrote it, interesting idea, interesting idea, I can't seem to bring it up to 500+ words, already have it (interesting idea), not in her character.
Thank you, and I hope you enjoy it further.