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Reviewer: Monkey Typewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 4:57 PM Title: Hello.

Either the one where you're Catherine's slave or sex toy, the one where Cassandra notices you, or Caroline's responses to different allegations. I don't care too much which you do, but any are cool with me.

Reviewer: Maniac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 7:35 AM Title: Hello.

I like the start a lot. I find your writing style to be well-balanced; descriptive but not tiresomely so. Personally, I'm mostly looking forward to Catherine's chapters and I hope you keep on updating!



Author's Response:

Why thanks, Maniac!

Catherine's chapters, eh? Be warned, her route has more BAD ENDs than most JRPGs would even dream of.

Reviewer: Brosus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 12:01 PM Title: Hello.

Interesting! Been a while since I've read a 'choose your own path' sort of thing. Especially for giantess type content. Well, unless you count interactives, but with so many people that's just a mess...

Pretty good writing style so far, can't wait to see how you do when you get to the meat of the story. All of the sisters sound good, but... I'm going with Candace. I've always liked fit girls.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I pride myself on the strength of my concepts. I just got to rereading some old pick-your-path books from when I was a kid, and the idea struck.

The meat is coming. 

I think you mean "Caroline". Candace is the fourth sister, who hasn't impacted the story just yet.

Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 6:31 AM Title: Hello.

Could you remove tags until they're applicable?



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I plan on using all of them. Eventually. 

Of course, depending on your path, you might not see all of them. That's nearly a guarantee. 

Reviewer: shall328 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 2:26 AM Title: Hello.

Definitely Cassandra, I love busty redheads and nerdy girls. Perfect girl for me. Caroline would be my second choice.

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 1:44 AM Title: Hello.

Seems like an intresting story so far :) I look forward to reading more

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 12:41 AM Title: Hello.

caroline. cant wait for the next

Reviewer: shall328 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 11:26 PM Title: Hello.

This seems like a pretty cool concept. I'm interested to see where you take it from here. I'll definitely be keeping tabs on this story.



Author's Response:

Why, thank you. 

Quick question: which path are you starting on?

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