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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2016 12:50 PM Title: Tenacious

No, Mary, you're not tenacious. You're obsessively-compulsively the point of psychopathy.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 5:50 AM Title: Tenacious

The WFBS is weird to me. The logic behind their philosophy makes no sense to me. I guess the gist of their philosophy is that the reason men can't be trusted to be leaders of the world because they are too violent and emotional, and women are more sensitive to the needs of the many. It's like arguing that women should rule because its proven that they can use 20% of their brain, in comparison to the 10% men use. Neither statements are true.

In general, the organization seems like its a few steps away from being either a cult or a communist paramilitary organization. Not saying there's any hope they will be, I just get those vibes.

Honestly, the story's hard to comment on, because the story flows slowly, but not bad-slow. It's consistently really good. I'm grasping at straws for things to complain about.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 9:40 PM Title: Tenacious

The plot thickens. I'll be tuning in now. I hope David can admit to his insecurities before it's too late.
Also great chapter. Looking forward to what happens next.


Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 7:17 PM Title: Tenacious

  Mary worries me but I can only watch from here as the loom of evil spins, creating more evil. Other than that, I like the explanation you gave for WFBS' hierachy, really creates a clearer picture of how the organisation works. 

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