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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 2: Kovalevsky

Even though English is not your first language, you seem be doing alright. However, I did feel there wasn't enough description to break up the dialogue. What is in this chapter was good, however, and you managed to keep the tension.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 2: Kovalevsky

I'm really getting into this. Looking forward to see what happens next.

aaron

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