[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 5:04 PM Title: 'Final Tirade'
well, im not going to give this a poor review just because it turned into something I wasn't expecting and frankly dislike. it is well written, and so I'm sure to those who like the violent murder side of this fetish, this is great. but to someone who is into a gentle giantess, the crush stuff is just literary-snuff, pure nightmare fuel
[Report This]Date: October 31 2014 4:24 AM Title: 'Final Tirade'
Well done! I approached this story expecting a rather light hearted drama with predictable struggles, but now that I see where the story has lead, it seems to carry a fairly strong underlying psychological aspect when you consider each character's background along with its developments and the role that may have played in their decision making process.
Initially I had determined that the main characters were too unrelatable given their social circumstances and character flaws, but that was a judgement based on the assumption that their relationship and social developments would be uncharacteristically forced to work in their favor for the sake of the plot. Since this is not at all the case, this is not at all a problem.
This story is actually rather dark in spite of the title, and I have an appreciation for a story that can take a character with a realistic personality and place them in a scenario where they develop into an extremist, and to do so without straining suspension of disbelief. Decisions made and actions taken fell within the range of each character's logical reasoning given their perspective.
At the end of the day, the characters that tell the story are definitely pretty foolish. While that isn't necessarily a bad thing, I do think it would improve the story if one of the perspectives was told from the view point of someone capable of observing the other characters and acknowleding or expressing the flaws in their thoughts and actions as one who actually knows better.
There were some instances in the story where the actions of the character didn't seem to quite agree with the way the character was presented-- Namely Will since he seemed to be a legitamently intelligent man that knew whose rear to kiss to make a profit. When he lashed out at Christy he seemed to have skipped the phase where he gets so drunk that he completely drops is facade. Extremely cliche' but not at all an unlikely event.
I enjoyed reading this story, great work!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2014 11:40 PM Title: 'Final Tirade'
Another nice story, though the ending felt a little rushed. Nice work aside from that, keep it up! I'm certainly going to read your next story.
Date: October 25 2014 10:55 PM Title: 'Final Tirade'
This was a bad ending. Plain and simple. The jump from full on killer was too fast. And what happened to the shrink epidemic? You kinda just let it go out the window without a care. This was an excellent story till this last chapter.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2014 7:07 PM Title: 'Final Tirade'
That was kind of...abrupt?
I was rooting for those two.
Date: October 25 2014 6:38 PM Title: 'Final Tirade'
She went full psycho at the end there, and for seemingly no reason too! I mean Dan was fully justified being angry with her, she raped that girl just because...I dont really get how she went from likable, flawed, playful christy to full on killer so quickly! And we never got any sort if conclusion on the shrunken people thing! What was the point of addin that plotline if it never went anywhere? Good story overall but i was left scratching my head at that ending.