Reviewer: Marussia Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

What a brilliant story you wrote here. The interactions between Billy and everyone were on point and a real joy to read. I'm happy with the ending and think you concluded the story at the right moment with Pam getting a new boyfriend and ready to move on away from Billy. I look forward to reading your future stories with how great this one was :)