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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 8: Ride Him Cowgirl Part 2!

Wow, I love that ass play!

I feel like the cop should take Rick home. How?

Well Jessica could shrink the cop, and then have the tiny cop handcuff Rick. Jessica then makes a deal with the cop to have a threesome.

Jessica then enlarges the cop for the threesome with Rick, all while Brad is stuck in Jessica's ass. Jessica then puts Rick in her vagina and the cop uses a strapon to push Brad further inside Jessica's ass, and Rick futher inside Jessica's vagina.

Jessica then orgasm, and Rick slides out of her vagina. Brad is still stuck in Jessica's ass. Jessica takes the handcuffed Rick, and hands him to the cop and she sticks Rick into her vagina.

The cop leaves and Jessica goes to sleep with Brad still in her ass.

Thats my idea. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, I am glad to hear you like the story so much.

 

Unforrtunately I doubt your idea will amke  it in fully, but I may use some of it, I am sorry but I want to relay how much she still loves Brad and while she may stray I don't feel like her power trip will get so big that she'd cheat on her husband.

 

 

I havea a vision of how I want her to evolve now, that I think a lot of you readers will enjoy.

But by all means keep reding, reviewing and giving me your input, it would not be the first time I worked feedback into my writing.

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