Reviews For Unaware Adventure
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Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

Fun idea. Like it so far.

Reviewer: Michalecs Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

A choose your own adventure. Good idea. Maybe go 2-3 thousand words per chapter, and knock out a bit of that whitespace to make it a little less distracting to read, but there's potential here.

Reviewer: sammysamson84 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

yay ... the death endings are a really nice idea...

 

the story itself is promising ... but not enough for a rating yet ... i hope to be able to read some more of it in the near future ;)

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