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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 7:54 PM Title: Deleted

Yes, great story.

It can't finish here. What about Amber's taking of Steve?

Please continue.



Author's Response:

I haven't touched this story in seven years.  I'm still working on The Initiation.  I'll consider it.  :)

 

Dee

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 6:19 PM Title: Deleted

I like how amber got to be included in the fun



Author's Response:

Thanks! I did too. That part wasn't in my outline. It just came to me as I was writing. I normally don't write about different scales of height, but it seemed to be the right thing to do. 

Dee

 

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