Reviews For The Turnover
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Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2023 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Nice

I wish we had growing moms, in the families mothers grow huge and sexy

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2023 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Nice

I wish we had growing moms, in the families mothers grow huge and sexy

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro

I don't like that the girls have really gotten unnaturally sadistic.  They seemed pretty nice in earlier chapters.  I'd like to see playful/mischivous giantesses, not the bitches these girls are turning into.  Shrinking him because its fun or cool, not out of malice.  Let the guy gain some enjoyment out of the experience, even as they make his size from him. This story started out so promising.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, changes are in store.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro

I feel terribly sorry for the girls, theyre raping him and as was mentioned that's against the law. Theyll likely get some sort of punishment if he requests it. Not that he will, even if it would be interesting, because neither him nor the girls have thought of the consequences, so that threat must not be looming as much as I thought. I personly would like to see more story revolving around his cheaty pause/play feature.

Reviewer: Littleben Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Intro

This is so great! I love it! Please continue more(this is my first review) and please update as fast as possible! I need to read more!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Intro

You're a strange one. Good job!

Reviewer: simplerthing Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Characters with appreciable personalities are a rarity in harem fics and they're both rarer still in gts. I really like Nataline in particular and I hope you can do as well with the Jessica and Amber as you have with the other three. Please do keep writing! One question on the turnover: Do the selected men change in the next one?



Author's Response:

Thanks, I like to make it read more like a real story.  But I don't have a characted named Amber.  Did you mean Stephanie?

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