Date: May 18 2015 1:07 PM Title: Demolition Girl
Great chapter! I'm surprised that Jessica was pushed so far near death early in the story like this! And now she's evolved to be more powerful than before...I'm awaiting the next chapter, it seems like things are starting to head in another direction from the original story!
Author's Response:
Well I did promise my readers that the story and series as a whole would go in a different direction than the original. Things will be interesting from here on out, the differences will be much clearer now but Zoltan showing up so early should have been a sign of the deviations I made :)
Yeah I retained that evolution thing from the original but I threw the growth spurt in, last time it wasn't there because she was already 300 feet tall, she didn't need to grow any bigger. Not only powerful but she retains her sexiness as well, the world better watch out!