Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2014 5:44 PM Title: Meals and Monopoly

Kind of a fun chapter and I certainly like to see them get along somewhat. I will say that Im not sure how these two conflicting personalities will love oneanother someday, its gonna be tough to write that convincingly.

Author's Response:

Erm...opposites attract? I like seeing them clash with each other, its more fun to write than the often bland interaction between Jessica and Jack in the last one. 

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2014 12:29 PM Title: Meals and Monopoly

I admire your courage. I tried and failed to do a rewrite. I’ll never attempt it again. I like the quote: "Write the book you want to read." I simply don’t want to reread any of my old stuff. :)

As for the world, Jessica’s humble abode is a place of amazement. How did she ever get a stove and utensils of such size? Surely they must look somewhat different than what Jack’s used to seeing because she’s the only person of her size in the world. Even with military support, manufacturing such conveniences must have been tremendous feats of engineering. I wonder if she helped the teams of people install it. Probably.

Author's Response:

I think my old stuff deserves to be done in a better way, especially with a personal favourite in Escape and the model I based Jessica off, it should not be done so poorly plus I kind of owe it to the readers, I never did finish Aftermath but the redo of Aftermath will be a lot better in terms of character development and plot, something I never really though about the first time. 

  All those are secrets that will be explained and revealed in later chapters, I have it all planned and it'll be better than the last one.