Reviews For The Escape Redux
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Reviewer: jajefan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 6:48 PM Title: Jessica's Tale

I hope the next chapter is long.
It's taken 3 weeks already :P

Author's Response:

Give me time, good things come to those who wait. Plus I have school and stuff to deal with. I'll see if I can get it out this weekend. If it comes out earlier then good.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 8:06 PM Title: Jessica's Tale

Flashbacks are always tough but frequently necessary. I liked how you made them more engaging by including interruptions. The playful banter between Jack and Jessica helped keep me interested. I would have liked a little more information on the accident with Jamie (boy or girl?). Clearly Jessica doesn't want to remember the incident. Maybe it will come up later. It would help to understand her personality better, and perhap her reason for being so cautions around those smaller than her.



Author's Response:

I wanted Jack and Jessica to have more distinct personalities so that was thrown in. 

Jamie is a tough one, Jessica's interactions with that person were not a happy memory. I'll get to it. It'll be a better story than its predecessors. 

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