Date: January 19 2015 5:34 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
@mjfan
I have other stories going, and I am not sure when I want to release them, but I want to be able to dedicate myself to a single story at a time.
Vacation Abroad: Immigration's plotline has been written, but actual chapters are yet to be written. It depends on how me and Nostory coordinate. So while I can't give a definite answer, it will come out sometime this year, but most likely during the same time the original came out in 2014. So sometime in summer, most likely. Due to me having time. But it could come out earlier, it all depends on how the two other stories go, how fast I write them, but I have not forgotten about Vacation.
Author's Response:
Which of course I'll be more than willing to help with.
Date: January 19 2015 5:29 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
It should be noted that any spelling mistakes are my fault, to anybody who noticed any, as I didn't get to check the chapter because something went wrong my email.
Other than that, really loved the interaction with Lauren. Intense, creepy, and had that sort of feeling you get in a movie where you feel that at any second, the whole situation can change. Especially considering just how polite Lauren is, in comparison to Jack's naivete.
Author's Response:
Don't sweat over it, can't fault you for technical difficulties.
Thank you, I really wanted to make it feel like Lauren was a woman you wouldn't want to cross.
Date: January 19 2015 5:12 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
Thank you..
Author's Response:
You're welcome.
Date: January 19 2015 9:34 AM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
Do you know vgiv is gonna write vacation abroad 2
Author's Response:
He has plans for it but not at the moment.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2014 4:50 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
ah finally another chapter. It's nice that you keep the pace of the relationship/character development slow this time, and not rush it like last. Also, is that a hint of doubt I see playing into jack's words? :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, another problem I had with the original was that I rushed it. As for Jack, you know he has a plan to escape from Jessica and all I can say is that you'll find out in a few chapters whether or not those doubts work.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2014 6:43 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
Wow, another great chapter. I love how you remade her life story, not so different, but still a little bit so that its more interesting. Thanks for the update :) They're good.
Author's Response:
Thanks, you'll see traces of the original here and there but gradually it'll become a series that stands out from it.
Date: July 31 2014 9:53 AM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
Sarcastic Jess is starting to grow on me...Im liking where things are headed, is Jack really that afraid of the girl to try an escape attempt? And im wondering if Jess would even care, I mean it isnt like they are all buddy buddy.
Author's Response:
Glad you like her and as for your questions, you'll have to wait and see .
Date: July 27 2014 3:01 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
I like the character development a lot more than the old one. Love to see how it turns out! Oh, and please work on the aftermath, it's just SOOO GOOD!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for liking the changes. Stick around and enjoy the rest of it, I've planned the whole of The Escape Redux and the redo of Aftermath because when the former ends, the ending will be very different from the original.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2014 7:23 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
Not gonna lie im not too keen on rewrites, BFG took me a bit of self convincing for nostalgia's sake...But Ill give this a shot too, as long as things arent too similar to the original you'll grab me aboard again. So far Im surprised by how much of a dick Jack comes across as...I dont really remember if that happened in the original or not...
Although I dont blame him for being scared and trying to bribe Jessica to let him go, If I wasnt a gts lover id prolly be scared shitless myself.
Author's Response:
I'm doing this to correct the loopholes present in the original and also to improve the quality of the writing. I promise you that by the end of this one, which I've planned out all the way will see our characters head down a different path. Hopefully you grow to love it like BFG did for you. As for Jack's behaviour, he wasn't like this in the original and this is me adding conflict and also a unique personality, he was kind of bland of in the old one. Same for Jessica, she'll be more developed here. Seeing a giantess would scare anyone for the first time so I can excuse that one.
Thanks for the review, its great to see one of my regular reviewers comment here!
Date: July 18 2014 4:12 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
Yea, uh, there is a j missing in that first word?
Me and Nostory, plus a third author are working on something, it won't disappoint. Nostory don't say who it is!
Author's Response:
I'll edit it, I kind of just copied and pasted it from Google Docs. Thanks for pointing it out.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2014 2:32 PM Title: You Scream, I Scream, Everybody Scream!
I like it. It sounds like it's going to get sexy.
Author's Response:
Jessica is a sexy girl, things will be fun.