Date: April 01 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 30: Ella's Words
Short review because in a few minutes I've got to stop reading for at least a few hours.
What's non-canon about the 1st story? You even mentioned right in this story that "She’d of course apologized numerous times in the time afterward" - did I miss something?
Author's Response:
A couple small things. The first story makes it seem like Judy's PMRD is the only one of its kind, since Ella hasn't heard of shrinking before. In general, too, the personalities of both Judy and Ella are a little different. Judy was shown being a little more focused on making sure her son learned his lesson out of love, while Ella was just having some fun. From the second story onward, Judy's goals have more to do with self-advancement and teaching Scott his place.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 30: Ella's Words
Ohh I se a renewed Scott. Will this get Maggie and Judy going again. And will Maggie tell Judy what happened previously or will she experiment with Scott. Will Ella keep her love strong for Scott or will she try him in her shoes like she did previously. As for the writing there are no spelling/grammar errors and the flow is great. Keep up the great work. Don't ever stop sriting you have a real gift.
Author's Response:
Scott is indeed renewed, and really, it was probably necessary if there was even going to be another story. I'll hold back on spoiling character actions since some of that will be revealed in the last 2 chapters.
Date: February 08 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 30: Ella's Words
I think judy lost already her status as mom n parent for his son. Can't wait to see the talk with scott!
Author's Response:
Scott might very well feel the same way.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2015 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 30: Ella's Words
Hope for Scott and sympathy? Somewhere Jacksmith is tied up and his doppleganger is giving the little guy a few chapters of freedom...either way I am enjoying the recent upswing for out protagonist even if bratty Maggie was awesome.
Author's Response:
Yeah I only just now got untied but the damage is done I suppose. :/
[Report This]Date: February 07 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 30: Ella's Words
I always love it when the main protagonist whom has been humiliated, abused, incarcerated so that he can finally have his "moment in the sun".
I am likewise satisfied with Maggie's continued benevolence. She may either come to a startling realization about Scott's situation or she was just so disgusted with Nancy's actions she has just been in a stupor. I'm hoping it's the former but knowing Maggie's track record, it's just too easy to say she's good now because that doesn't fit her character(in my opinion at least).
I'm so glad that Ella has not only returned but has seemingly started their relationship were they left off at. Even though I love Judy's character, I really hope she doesn't spoil Scott and Ella's reunion.
aaron
PS I can't remember what Ella was like in part one anyways, hahaha.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I can't say Maggie's magically transformed into a perfect angel now, but she may be a little different in the future after her conversation with Scott; it would be hard not to be. And Judy has bigger fish to fry than her son's romances, as we'll see in the final two chapters.
Ella herself was basically the same, though she's a little more mature in this one since a few years have gone by.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 30: Ella's Words
He might not realize it, but I think he has a developing ally in Maggie. I have to wonder how she'd feel if she'd heard his breakdown here bout how much his actions while he was drunk are tearing him apart.
Author's Response:
That's a good thought about Maggie. Ordinarily she would probably just brush off Scott's blubbering, but after their encounter in the poolhouse, she might've been more willing to listen.
Date: February 07 2015 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 30: Ella's Words
good to see Ella backing Scott. I am wrong maybe but for me it's possible Judy or Maggie (the old one) would frame Scott abt accident event. just a theory. Can't wait the two final chapters!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Anything is possible here; Judy certainly wants to keep Scott in her house.