[Report This]Date: February 04 2015 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 27: Where Were We?
That woman... I'm still stuck ~ half of chapter 27, I swear *I* need to think of Ella when I see her!
Author's Response:
And that thought is just barely enough for Scott to make it. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: January 27 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 27: Where Were We?
Great chapter. I wonder what Nacy has in store for Scott. Will he be safe during his time with Nancy or will her wilder side break free and force him into certain situations. I cannot wait to see where you take this story. Will there be a raunchy part or will this stick with a foot and mouth theme. There are tons of possibilities here. As for grammar and spelling there was on sentence that bothers me. The sentance stated "Honesty at this point couldn’t hurt him more than it already had." Shouldn't the sentance read instead Honesty at this point it couldn’t hurt him more than it already had. I donnot know how you wanted this structure to be, but to me the later sentance reads better. This was the only thing troubling me in this chapter. Besides this I lioved it. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. You really have a talent.
Author's Response:
Glad you're paying attention. Your suggestion would be right if the word was "honestly" as an adverb, but it's actually "honesty." So if restructured it could say "At this point, honesty couldn't hurt him more than it already had."