Date: January 13 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 24: Frisky Business
So this is your Christmas present for Scott? When he grows up he'll certainly pay you a visit - unless Judy's plan is to replace "When" with "If" of course...
Author's Response:
I'd say you're on track for Judy's plans. Scott's future Christmases may be looking bleaker.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 24: Frisky Business
The anticipation is killing me. Can't wait for that garden party and those "little surprises" that Nancy promised. Thinking Judy will be dressed to kill(not literally of course... Although).
Is this some kind of campaigning benefit dinner? If so where's Judy's husband?(or is she even married)
Great setup too. Nancy is the textbook definition of a cougar lol.
aaron
PS Merry Christmas
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, and merry christmas to you too. It's a party to help suck up to Judy's financial backers for her upcoming campaign. Judy is not married, though she used to be.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 24: Frisky Business
Ah that whacky Nancy with all her naughtiness and her um...nice feet.
Author's Response:
Those two traits seem to go hand in hand around here, don't they?
[Report This]Date: December 22 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 24: Frisky Business
Great chapter. Love the reintroduction of Nancy. I wonder how far she will go before Scott is thought more for her pleasure. Somehow I think Nancy has an even dirtier mind than Judy and Maggie combined. On the critiques I have none. The spelling and grammar is perfect. The flow of the story is flawless, from what I can tell. Keep up the great work. Cannot wait for the next chapter. I know there are only a few chapter left in this installment but I hope this series continues. I love the Idea you have developed here and I really like the characters especially Judy, Maggie and Nancy.
Author's Response:
That tipping point for how Nancy views Scott is probably coming very soon. And I'd say you're right about who's got the dirtiest mind here, though of course that doesn't necessarily make her the biggest threat to Scott. I will definitely continue with these characters after this story ends. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 22 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 24: Frisky Business
Hmmm. Things just got a little more interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: December 22 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 24: Frisky Business
Holy crap! I don't want to wait too long to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Neither does Nancy. ;)