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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 23: Tied Up at the Moment

Five episodes of Gossip Girl... "mild"? :)

I was thinking that part of the reason she's behaving like that is that finding out what he did must have hurt her, and she either wants to hurt him back or at least not show any sign of weakness in front of him - but riczar's theory is better.

(Time to replace "think of Ella" with "tell her about the no-phone rule")

Author's Response:

Well, maybe "mild" compared to the alternative games Maggie could've enacted.

Who says Maggie's behavior can't be a mix of several reasons? ;)

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 23: Tied Up at the Moment

Well Maggie kept her promise for once! Plus she didn't molest scott ... yet! she was being nice! but it must be"calm before storm". Ella want to clear thing up!!? not looking good for Scott!



Author's Response:

Scott definitely has reason to feel nervous at this point.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tied Up at the Moment

Maggie is somewhat softening...but this is a Jacksmith sister...what is a guy to do with his assumptions...read more...OK!



Author's Response:

Hehe... who knows, I may break my own stereotype just this one time?  ;)

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tied Up at the Moment

Great chapter, Im starting to see a change with Maggie. I just hope this doesn't end the interactions between them. I hope she gets more "daring" and decide to try other things. I still like her other personality better but depeding on how she changes and where you take it I could see myself liking this Maggie too. I just dont want to be " I care too much for Scott", or "Your my boyfriend now,scott" or something bizarre like that. Again I could find no mistakes in your writing. You deliver great stories. Keep up the great work; cannot wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Maggie doesn't have any plans to cease interaction with Scott, even if she's starting to change. You definitely won't see a twisted romance of some kind forming between them though. Thanks for the read/review.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 23: Tied Up at the Moment

Great chapter. Scott and Ella will finally meet, Maggie permitting of course. But this is actually better news for Maggie, now she can do whatever she wants like maybe an intimate shower or she could be merciful. The ball is entirely in her court lol. And I'm looking forward to see how she handles this without Judy knowing. Speaking of Judy a garden party... Sounds even better than that book club and I can't wait.

aaron
PS the way Ella was speaking it sounded like she'd enjoy having Scott back at his tiny size.
Also, I've always been curious about this, what shoe size is Ella? I only ask because when she had Scott in Judy's size 12 pump it didn't seem too big for her, the shoe seemed like a perfect fit.

Author's Response:

You're right that Maggie's still in control of the situation, so Scott even now may not be quite off the hook.

Honestly I haven't thought of a shoe size for Ella. She's a smaller size than Judy, though obviously not by so much that her foot was noticeably dwarfed by the pump.

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