Date: December 19 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 21: Looking Up
I can't take my mind off "Then I'll huff, and I'll puff..." - my 1st exercise in "listening comprehension" was listen to the story and write down every word; it took forever, and I still remember many parts of it by heart.
Pretend this is a serious, thoughtful comment :-"
Author's Response:
I always appreciate your serious literary critiques.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 21: Looking Up
Another great chapter and i hope we see more of libby soon, I'm starting to like her and Scott as a paring. It's also starting to seem like she's planning on taking Scott away from there. Or at least she's thinking it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Libby probably has considered the possibility of trying to save Scott, though she's also aware that there are a limited number of people that want to help him, so she'd be more easily incriminated.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 21: Looking Up
Great chapter. Again I have no complaints. Just wondering if we, for the peopl who do not enjoy intimate M/m interaction if we should skip the next chapter or if it will be the same as the previous interactions with his brother.Also I fear for Libby. not that she is getting meaner, but she will do something stupid. Like stealing Scott, getting caught and being punished in Magggie's or her household. I hind of want it in that direction. Keep up the great work and cannot wait for the next chapter (unless it is an intimate interaction with M/m).
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. There won't be any fetishized M/m situations here or in the rest of the series. And Libby may indeed try to act somehow, if not here then in a future story.
Date: December 06 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 21: Looking Up
In this chapter, Maggie said something that was very interesting. She resisted making Scott bigger then 4 inches because she didn't like seeing him like this; where she can make stuff out. I think it means, somewhere in that messed up mind of hers, I think Maggie does care. She keeps Scott as small as possible so its easier to avoid thinking that he's a human being and her older brother.
I still don't know why he's relying on Maggie to get into contact with Ella. I'm sure he could reason with his mother to let him talk to her, considering how troubled the relationship is, and she appeared to like Ella in an earlier story.
At some point I hope to know what Judy is thinking of. What her long term plan is for her family. Does she really want Scott rehabilitated and a contributing member of society, or is she hoping to keeping him under her control forever? This and his previous punishments is really turning him into a mental case.
Author's Response:
Good thinking there about Maggie's view of Scott. It helps her treat him the way she does if she views him as less of a person.
You're right that it might be worth a try to ask Judy. Scott's perceptions of what's possible are just kind of warped at this point.
By the end of the story, there will definitely be some clarity on what Judy truly wants for her family.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 21: Looking Up
Ah, a school girl crush.
Part of me kind of expected Maggie to use the device on her.
Author's Response:
Hehe. That may have fit her character, though do remember that the device only works on those who have been registered, so she can only use it on Scott.