Date: November 19 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 17: Unfortunate Discovery
"Scott had to blink a few times" - right after **I** had to blink a few times... I still don't know if Judy thinks Scott could break down or she just wants him to look at her for help.
The 3rd alternative, of course, being she's going to surprise all of us (again!) with whatever plan she has :)
Author's Response:
Well, Judy does like surprises...
[Report This]Date: November 13 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 17: Unfortunate Discovery
Let me guess.
Since Judy will be back in one hour, I'm guessing that this is the deal that Maggie comes up with:
Maggie pulls out the weeds very quickly to save Scott the work, but Scott now has to venture into Maggie's mouth for the rest of the hour.
Author's Response:
;)
There's actually one extra caveat involved in the deal, but you're basically on the money.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 17: Unfortunate Discovery
I had to take a break and when I come back to discover you have a new story I had to read all the previous tim-outs again to remember the characters. These stories are great. You have very little to no grammar/spelling errors. Especially in the newer chapters. You have a great dunamic and I love how each chapter has a climax and that each section gets a little bit more of "will she really do it". Like here in chapter 17 I am hoping Maggie does put him into her mouth and eventually goes beyond this barrier as well. I love the characters in the story. Let me just say how grateful I am that you keep M-m interactions to a minimal. My favorite character is maggie and I sure hope that there is more "alone' time with her brother. However, I feel that Judy is a litle more docile and it makes me question where her hunger from the previous stories went. Especially, I think the third installment, when you make her remember when she was a kid and put her hamster fluffy 2 in her socks. So to me I have to believe that there is more than meets they eye. I just hope that she loosens her rules with maggie. I cannot wait to see what maggie has in store for the "litlle" criminal. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the read/review. The next few chapters will be fairly Maggie-centric, so you're in luck there. Judy's strange behavior this story will explained in time; she has definitely not just decided to soften up.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 17: Unfortunate Discovery
One of the tyranical teen girls put in place? Surely this won't stand...
Author's Response:
Surely not...
[Report This]Date: November 12 2014 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 17: Unfortunate Discovery
It seems like Maggie's on thin ice and doesn't even realize it. I hope we see Judy using the PMRD on Maggie soon.
Speaking of Judy, it seems like she's starting to realize that Maggie is a little too interested in her brother lately and might go to far. I mean, if she feels the need to threaten her with the PMRD. Am i reading that right?
Thanks for reading. We won't see Maggie affected by the PMRD just yet, though; Judy is actually a bit less concerned about how her children are interacting than she seemed to let on there.
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