Date: November 05 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 15: Taking the Plunge
30 chapters! See, it's worth to read comments ^^
Date: November 05 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 15: Taking the Plunge
(resisting the temptation to read the other comments) I don't care if the cream is real, she's faking it. And if not, well, it doesn't matter, she was going to do it anyway, just because it's her... Seriously, these two chapters are GREAT!
[OT] I had to look up "cute as a button"; https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/171282/cute-as-a-button is funny (for some definition of fun)
Author's Response:
You may be onto something with Judy's "tooth ache." ;)
[Report This]Date: November 03 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 15: Taking the Plunge
Really well written I love when this is heading, I get the feelimg it's gonna go wrong very fast for Scott if he falls off that tooth
Author's Response:
Thanks! Scott's trouble inside giant mouths definitely isn't over yet.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 15: Taking the Plunge
Poor Scott...somewhat
Author's Response:
Just somewhat.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 15: Taking the Plunge
Very nice descriptions. So glad that Judy's mouth had a pleasant smell to it at least. But how does her closing her lips but leaving her jaw fixed not strain her muscles? I mean she just closes her lips over her teeth and still has her jaw fixed to allow Scott to still do his job, my thing is that her jaw would still hurt from this regardless if her lips were parted or not. So why force Scott to work in the dark for nothing...(besides cruelty which I don't believe is the case in this instance)
Anyways, I'm really looking forward to see how Judy "rewards" Scott for this chore because it will undoubtedly be something of her choosing(hopefully foot related because she wants her toes extra pretty). At any rate I can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
PS will Maggie(I'm almost positive that is the sister's name) be shrunken by Judy in this story or will there be another where her and Scott are Judy's personal assistance?
Author's Response:
Interesting that you point out how Judy technically wasn't making it easier by closing her mouth; I wouldn't totally discount the possibility of Judy just doing something to show who's in charge...
Maggie will not be shrinking in this story, though anything could happen in later ones. Thanks for reading!