[Report This]Date: October 24 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face
Great story! I haven't read all of the previous ones but I jumped into this easily enough. Compelling interaction and dialog works to immerse the reader in spite of the missing bits of history. However, it does tempt me to read some of the earlier ones.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading man, glad you're liking it. And not that I'm biased, but definitely check out the earlier ones. ;)
[Report This]Date: October 23 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face
Was it Kyle that left the remote for Scott, or did Judy or Maggie just accidentally left it there?
Author's Response:
More than likely, the remote was just left there accidentally. Maggie's the only one who intentionally places it anywhere while thinking of Scott.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face
Dammit I'm curious now.
Author's Response:
Hehehe.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face
Ah, I have a feeling I know who that guy is but my memory is fuzzy at times.
Author's Response:
The guy will be explained before the story is over. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: October 22 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face
You are really good at keeping Scott right on the edge of peace without ever acheiving it. It's really painful to see him earn these brief respits and not be capable of fully enjoying them because of everything else going on. Maggie's schemes, Judy's manipulative caring demeanor, Nancy's forced sexual advances, is this better than jail? Here's hoping he can reach Ella and sort things out. For better or worse at least he'd get some resolution to it.
I don't know who Walter Brandon is but I mean come on embezzling? That's just a dick move.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Especially by the end of this story, Scott's going to be asking himself that very same thing about jail.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face
“First things first, though. We’re going to need to get you into some different clothes.”
Wonder if this means a bathing suit?
Great chapter where we learn Maggie is his only option to get in touch with Ella unless he could somehow convince Nancy to help(for favors of course).
But anyways, I'm looking forward to see what Judy has in store for her little Scott come next chapter. Also will we find out why he recognized the man on the news because it appeared Judy did as well.
Great chapter even though I'm not a fan of Kyle I understand his appearance was necessary. Wish we had been there when Judy shrunk him.
aaron
PS she should have a "little" slumber party with him, with maybe dome book club members and their tinies... Maybe that doesn't fit very well with this story but maybe a movie night with Judy as a reward for his good behavior or something... At his tiniest size of course
Author's Response:
In this case, "different" means "waterproof." He could try to convince Nancy to help him, though her forcible seduction of him revolves a lot around him being unable to get back with his girlfriend, so that may be tough. Though we haven't actually seen Judy shrink Kyle yet, that'll most likely be changing in the next story. You're right that there's not really a place for a slumber party scenario in this story, but I wouldn't rule it out for future ones.
Date: October 22 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Familiar Face
Oh, so iiuc there will be a new jailmate... your had me worried, I feared there would be too many giant men! The most obvious idea would be that Judy takes him and leaves Scott to Maggie most of the time, but something tells me they won't have it so easy (and so easily KNOWN: not knowing is a big part of being shrunken in this house)
I'm trying to think what kind of task could possibly require him to wear different clothes, but no luck yet (still thinking - not a scuba suit I hope ;)
A small note: being small reasonably means that he will notice every movement, frown, anything a normal sized person does - Mrs Stevens should remember that the smaller he gets, the more difficult it becomes to hide any feeling she doesn't have under her full control.
Author's Response:
I won't yet comment on the person on TV; all I'll say is Kyle will continue to be the only male figure in the house at a normal height. ;)
Scuba suit is not a bad guess...