Date: October 10 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Well, everything Judy&Maggie do is supposed to be for his sake - to help him make amends without going to jail at least; so, yeah, why should he not trust her? (...)
Author's Response:
Hehe. Jail's starting to look awfully friendly next to this.
Date: October 10 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
You are a super talented writer. I really enjoy reading your work. Thanks for sharing your creativity!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're enjoying.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Poor Scott, he should talk to Jack on how to live with bigger little sisters.
Author's Response:
Jack would probably consider what happens to Scott to be a vacation.
Date: October 09 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Hi, good story but I have a quick question, for the next chapter, could you put Kyle. I think it would be interesting if you expanded their relationship just a bit. You don't have to if you don't want to. Thanks ^_^
-Lisana
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Kyle will be appearing 2 chapters from now.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Oh hell no. I don't mind how much physical trauma you can put him through, but his own sister fucking with his love life is crossing one line too many. I don't know if this was your intention, but this chapter left me absolutely fuming. Getting cockblocked by your own sister during such a time like this is not okay. I'm not having a good time here. It was not poorly written, but I truly hated this chapter. I am not looking forward to what's to come. What I am looking forward to, however, is seeing swift justice bear down upon Maggie. Preferably in the form of several blows to the babymaker.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm sorry you didn't like the chapter. I did hope readers could try to sympathize with Scott's struggle here, though, and it sounds like you did. Maggie will eventually have to face up to her own cruelty.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 11: Phone and Foot Tag
Excellent chapter, in fact the last few have been stellar. Was a welcome change if not a bit of a tease to have Ella make the phone call but in all honesty I'm actually looking forward to what Maggie has in store for him(hope she shrinks him to a more manageable size *cough* 1in. *cough*) I'm little disappointed that Nancy and Judy didn't have fun with Scott at his tiniest size but I still enjoyed their interactions.
Can't wait to see when Judy's political career becomes more of a factor.
All and all, great stuff Jack. Looking forward to more of these great characters.(especially Judy)
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks man. Maggie won't be putting him down to 1 inch in this next chapter, but there will be a section later in the story where this will happen. Nancy actually prefers to have Scott a little bigger so she has more to work with, but Judy will be getting some time with Scott at 1 inch later as well.