Date: September 23 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
"Mommy loves you" now sounds even scarier than before; since she always has an ostensibly fine reason for everything, I really don't want to think how she will justify these kind of things.
Unless she's training him to face Nancy (yeah, sure...)
Btw, just out of curiosity, looking for "hubby", "husband", "dad", "widow", "father" etc didn't bring up anything - what happened to mr Stevens? Is it (will it be) important, or can we just assume he's out of their lives for whatever reason?
PS
In the 1st story: "As if sending a warning bell to her tiny sun" ;p
Author's Response:
Yes, Judy's actions in this chapter (and later ones) will indeed look much harder to justify. But Judy being Judy will have a reason for everything, even if it's twisted as hell.
Funny you mention Mr. Stevens; he'll actually be addressed later on in this story. So the answer is, yes he is important! And good catch on that typo.
Date: September 22 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
The only complaint I have is this story is not updated frequently enough, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I know the updates are a bit far apart, but I fully intend to keep up until the story is done.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
Speaking of Kyle, is there any chance he'll soften up his brother? I'd almost say that his brother giving him the cold shoulder bothers Scott more than what Judy and Maggie do. Almost.
Author's Response:
You're right that it hurts Scott more that Kyle treats him like this, because Maggie and Judy have always been rough, but his kid brother had been an ally before. There is a definite chance of Kyle starting to come around, though, and probably later on in this story, in fact...
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
One of my favorite series. Keep it up
Author's Response:
Thanks much!
Date: September 21 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
Another great chapter. Though I gotta say part of me hopes that Kyle will get the shrink punishment too so he can better understand what his brother goes through. He seems to be needlessly rude to him.
Maggie too, but her getting shrunk was suggested already.
Author's Response:
Thanks! We will definitely see Kyle reduced in size at some point, though not in this particular story. He's just deeply embittered towards Scott because he feels betrayed.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
This story is excellent so far. After the events of the first time out story, I wonder if Ella will abuse Scott's size as well(I'm sure nancy will).
I believe that he was set up(Drink was spiked by someone who has ties with his mother so they could enact their NWO plan in full force) but aside from that, I hope Ella doesn't hate Scott for too long for the crimes he was accused of.
Anyway, keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. It's probably no secret to say Nancy's going to take full adantage of Scott's size. Ella's a bit more complicated; she enjoys being around him while he's small, but understands how tough he has it here.
Interesting theory about a set-up; I guess we'll just have to wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 8: Breakfast of Champions
Another wonderful chapter, also he made off better than Jack did when Carly shared her cereal with him that faithful morning.
Author's Response:
Compared to the end of Blackmail 1, Scott's breakfast was a relaxing little English tea time.