Reviews For Time-Out 6: Power Play
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman
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Date: August 24 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman
What struck me in these chapters with Maggie is that he doesn't ask for water.
If he's not thirsty, I don't want to know it.
If he's afraid of asking - idem.
Author's Response:
Interesting thought. He probably is thirsty, but figures he's better off not trying to ask for anything, so Maggie doesn't get more ammo to tease him with.
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman
Date: August 12 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman
Can't wait for next chapter. That's what I've been waiting for.
aaron
Author's Response:
There'll be plenty of Judy for the next several chapters
Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman
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Date: August 12 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Girl to Woman
Great stuff as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks man