Date: August 12 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Excellent chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: August 04 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Maggie is becoming even more lovely.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Another great chapter. Going by her question, i take it Maggie was concerned and maybe worried when she found him knocked out?
Author's Response:
She was concerned, although at least partially because she knows the consequences would probably be dire for her if she permanently harmed him.
Date: August 01 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
That soccer game is my ultimate fantasy. Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it a lot.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Has to be the best series on here. Keep this line of attack up. Love the sisters interaction
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! Expect plenty more of the sister in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
I love Maggie.
Also at some point one of your sister tyrant characters needs to have a sister to torture, great stuff once again.
Author's Response:
I will certainly take that under consideration. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 31 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Gonna have to agree with riczar on this one. There's gotta be a mental limit on how much they can pt them through, right? Weren't they supposed to be a normal suburban family before all this happened? Honestly, I'd say that even if it meant the an injury or two for Scott, it'd be worth it for the family to find out what that limit is. Maybe a flick to the stomach after a rough play sesson and he coughs up blood? Punctured innards and all that. In any case, I hope it lightens up a bit too.
Your detail is superb as usual though, nice work
Author's Response:
There probably is indeed a limit somewhere, and it just might get reached eventually (meaning almost definitely). I will say that, no, they were never really a very 'normal' family in the sense of having solidarity amongst the family members; Scott's been the troublemaker since he was a teen and his mother's punishments have fed into a vicious cycle that's made them all pretty sickly dysfunctional. The content will be a bit less dark within the next couple chapters. Glad you like the detail!
Date: July 31 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3: Safety First
Sigh, apparently the PMRD must significantly increase your durability. He should be bruised at the very least, if not have broken bones. What I 'm waiting to see is him get truly hurt and see how his family reacts. If the family shrugs it off, I'd probably kill myself, as it proves how they really feel. That's what ticks me off the most about this family. They don't seem to have a limit to how badly they will treat him. I assume the time outside his house is supposed to be a break for him, but the treatment is worse. Well I hope the story lightens up a little at some point.
Author's Response:
There is a bit of suspension of disbelief needed on the wearing-in-the-shoe-without-broken-bones thing, but what can I say, it's a giantess story. I will note that part of what makes Maggie so confident in what she does to him is that she's never done anything that yielded consequences like a real lasting injury, so such a thing might force her to at least look at her actions if it happened. The story will soften up a bit after this opening.