Date: September 21 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was hoping they'd talk to each other. The woman didn't find it odd that a tiny person was walking around in her kitchen? This felt like an "unaware" story, but it is not tagged as such. The story was alright though I suppose, even if I disagreed with some aspects of it.
Date: February 13 2008 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I especially liked the attention to detail you put into this one. It's easy to visulize yourself in K's shoes. Well done my frend:)
Author's Response: Thank you girlfood! hey this was my very first story, two years ago!! Glad you like!! I just fnished my 20th story, i'll post it soon here. hey I really enjoy your current production "Food chain" !
Date: March 16 2006 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
A nice little story. A little suspenseful.
Author's Response: thanks a lot, stanley, i'm glad you like it .it's means something to me to get a review from someone who writes such good stories as yourself !