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Reviewer: monsterhunter22 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 5:53 PM Title: Prologue

Wonderful Story my friend. I love your stories so much. And to be honest if that were me I would be with Megan. She seems beautiful the way you describe her being athletic and on the soccer team. Plus she seems to care about the shrinkie more then anybody else. So for me I would glad to be her's then Jennifer and Stacy's. Although Jennifer isn't bad she just doesn't seem to care about Mike the way Megan cares about her slave.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 8:38 PM Title: Prologue

   'AWESOME'  ;`)

Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 7:17 AM Title: Prologue

Just letting u know that this is my favorite story on this site so far. I would love to see more. Perhaps a future story of the slaves living with there captors family's in the future ?

Reviewer: KushKing Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 12:00 AM Title: Prologue

Another great chapter friend! I must say the chapters with megan are my favorite. please keep it coming!

Reviewer: Casanova Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 7:01 PM Title: Prologue

What. A. Chapter.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 10:33 AM Title: Prologue

I like Megan and how she treats her slave. She doesn't show the same sociopathic tendencies as some of the other girls. Torturing small and helpless creatures tends to be a sign of mental illness. She treats her slave more like a beloved pet. She probably thinks he enjoys her games, which it seems like he actually does enjoy some of them.

Reviewer: dingbing Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 9:39 AM Title: Prologue

Sorry for not leaving a review sooner, I think it's finally time that I let you know I've been greatly enjoying this story. 

I have to admit, I haven't read any of the other stories in the series, but I am familiar with your work. I've read A Fine Day for Chelsea and Those Damn Yankees and I enjoyed both of those stories immensely. 

That being said, reading those stories always left me wishing there could have been more focus on feet, and this is exactly what this new story is delivering and I absolutely love it! Keep up the great work, I look forward to seeing where this goes as new chapters become available!

Reviewer: littletoy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 9:44 PM Title: Prologue

Good stuff! Great to see this series continued. Eagerly looking forward to more, please! :)

Reviewer: Casanova Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2014 10:37 AM Title: Prologue

Another fantastic entry, gtswburg. While you continue to have great characters, descriptions, etc., my favorite part of this story is actually a combination of the settings and action sequences. All of your scenes have such a visceral feel to them, and as someone mentioned before me, your foot scenes are some of the best on the site, even when they're just remembered (vs. action-oriented scenes like in the shower). I also really enjoyed how the tiny wanted to drink some coffee -- a unique perspective on the typical humiliating situation.

I honestly have very little to offer in terms of constructive criticism. Maybe my only thought is that perhaps you won't be able to sustain this story for too long if an actual plot doesn't begin to form. For instance, in A Fine Day for Chelsea, the plot was driven by her desire to get revenge on that popular cheerleader. In My Favorite Ex, the plot revolved around his ex-wife finding him not only living with a young lady, but also tiny. In any case, I won't continue to belabor the obvious, and I have the utmost faith in your ability to deliver a compelling story, as you have on numerous occasions. Obviously the story is just getting started and already there has been some nice foreshadowing.

I'll continue to follow this story and if something comes up I'll be sure to let you know. Thanks for another great story and I hope you'll add more foot content!

Reviewer: KushKing Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 12:54 PM Title: Prologue

Oh man great to see another entry in this series!!!! Please continue good sir

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 1:05 AM Title: Prologue

MY OPINION MATTERS TO ONE FETISH WRITER ON A RANDOM WEBSITE!

 

THANK YOU OBAMA!

 

P.S. good stuff and danke my good man.

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