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Reviewer: jag54 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

good job zane! been watching for your next chapter!

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Date: July 03 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm sensing things won't go according to plan or at-least smoothly.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, great idea!  

 

This is a well written piece that tells a genuine story.  Love the characters so far. 

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Date: June 28 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loving the detail you're putting forth in these chapters. It's good stuff.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

The plot thickens, good stuff.

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Date: June 27 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

Awesome concept.

 

 

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