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Reviewer: muammar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 8:40 AM Title: 'Jane Get's a New Toy'

I really like Jane! She make her slave kiss and lick her feet? :)

 

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Author's Response:

Cool Pic, Muammar!    I Love It!   '*.*'

Actually, she kinda looks like a teacher that I had in the fifth grade,... Nice!   I had her for two years, (5th & 6th grade) I won't say how much time I spent fantasizing about being shrunken down, and scampering around beneath her feet,... but, it was way, WAY, too MUCH!

Thanks for the view!  .... and the deja vu',...  ;`)

 

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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 8:34 AM Title: 'Jane Get's a New Toy'

I think she'll accidentally kill him, which will (in turn) "force" her to break her promise to Marie.

Author's Response:

She'll probably break her promise, anyway,...  Jane's pretty forgetful, and she's got the libido of a rutting rhino in heat!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 3:20 AM Title: 'Jane Get's a New Toy'

Hah! I knew you made these characters after us, and that was the proof! You asked for Gadjets opinion.

What do I want Jane to do?
I want Jane to torture Ajet just like how Julianne tortured Captain Jim. However, if Julianne is returning, the Julianne deserves to continue where she last left off.

So in that case, leaving him inside her panties is a good start, and perhaps she can use tape to add a bit more fun.

Keep it up! Jane is my 2nd favorite giantess in this story and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Yeah, that Julianna is quite 'unforgettable', is she not?  ;`)

Reviewer: t_jared Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 3:03 PM Title: 'Jane Get's a New Toy'

Omg...I love where this story is going and has gone.  Thank you very much.

 

I would love for Jane to introduce little Ajet to her ass.!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Man!  I'm glad your enjoying it!  ;`)

Oh, and btw,... Thanks for 'favoriting' me!  Much appreciated. 

.... Ajet's in a tight spot, for sure,... it's a dirty job, but,.. (as they say) someone has to do it!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 3:40 PM Title: Home~Sweet~Home

Sweet, you're back! Turkey kept u busy? Well, this was a great chapter.

I'm pretty sure Jane chose Ajet, becuase that's the guy that Jane was asking whether he was clean or not, and he is definitely clean by now.

That was some great math Cary...(slow clap).

Why couldn't Marie wash Ajet and Cary at the same time? Atleast bring them both to the bathroom, so she doesn't have to deal with Jane.

Also, why is Jane so slow on capturing a tiny? Like every time she is about to take one, Marie shows up. Deja vu all over again.

By the clothing that Jane was wearing, I can assume that she will probably do some naughty things to that specific tiny.

I hope Julianne returns and takes a tiny as well. That would be awesome!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  Yeah, I had to babysit my two litttle neice's,... my sister's regular 'Babysitter', took vacation and she didn't have anyone else avaliable to watch them on short notice,  so I got stuck watching the two little she-beasts for the entire weekend!

It wasn't too bad though,... their really sweet little girls, when their asleep...  ;`)

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I might bring Julianna back into the next chapter,... she's starting to get anxious again,  it's been awhile for her, and she's got an itch she just can't scratch!

Thanks again,... and I hope you had a good Thanksgiving as well! 

 

 

Reviewer: pequeno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 1:01 PM Title: Home~Sweet~Home

That story is in my favorite list. I love the marie's mother, is the better part.



Author's Response:

Thanks Pequeno! ... - Oh, and by the way, reALLY Like the Penname... ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 8:21 AM Title: Home~Sweet~Home

"He should be clean," Marie replied: "I held his soapy body under 'Ajet' of warm water for the last five minutes."

X-D

Author's Response:

Jane quickly interjects,  - "He won't be clean for very long,... I've got a 'dirty' little job, that he's just the right size for!"  -


Reviewer: abc3643 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

¿¿¿¡¡¡Next chapter!!!???

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2014 2:23 PM Title: 'The Hospital ~ 3'

Heh! If Tim Burton turned this into a movie, he'd probably call it "Planet of the Horny Giantesses."

;-D

Author's Response:

When's it coming out!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2014 2:51 AM Title: 'The Hospital ~ 3'

Yes! Finally we get to return to Marie's place with Jane and the 4 mini men. I hope Jane gets some naughty fun with one. Or better yet, Julianne shows up and keeps one. :)

What the heck is a neck yoak? And how does this harness and neck yoak look like something from a domination sex video? Jack must have had some domination sex in the past to recognize that. Lol

My guess is that it's a strap-on dildo and the giantesses will put each tiny man inside the dildo.

Author's Response:

'Yoke'.  Is the correct spelling, Yoak, is obsolete, oh well,.. I guess I learned another New word!  Lol!  ;`)

It's kinda like a wooden bar with hand holds in each end,... it's designed to restrain a persons arms, while keeping them held up and out away from their body.  The wooden bar rests on their shoulders and they are free to walk around, they just can't use their arms...

They were originally built to contain a pair of oxen, much larger of course,.. but the same concept.  Only, with these 'Yokes', there is also a ring fastened around the neck, to hold it in place.

You know?  You've seen them,... in that last 'fem-dom' video you watched,...   ;`)

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

We need an update!!  Chop! Chop! my good man. Chop! Chop! 

(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chop_chop_(phrase))

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2014 2:19 AM Title: 'The Hospital ~Part Two'

I agree with the other reviews. This is by far the most interesting story that is being updated on a consistent basis.

Some of my other favorite authors just....disappeared or something. Glad you are still into this story.

The doctor trying to grab Jack reminds me of when I was trying to catch my first fish when I was a kid. I couldn't grab that darn thing. It kept slipping from my hands. Lol.

Just want to clarify something. Is there a doctor and 1 assistant, or 2 assistants? I see the doctor, Amber, and Rachel. Is Amber the doctor, or a 2nd assistant? I recognize Rachel, but not Amber.

I'm ready for Jane and Marie to have some fun. Haven't seen them in for ever. I couldn't resist smiling at your response to Carycomis review. I really want to see what does, especially since now I have a hint that Jane will take Cary to play with.

I can't wait for the chapter after the next chapter! Lol

Author's Response:

Amber and Rachel are both trainees, working under Dr. Elizibeth Harris.  Amber is a tall, skinny, red head, with big blue eyes.  Rachel is shorter, with brown hair and brown eyes, slightly plump, but, not fat.    They're both about 25, but look and act much younger...

...Dr. Harris is smokin' hot for a 'fifty-plus-er', and she's never been married,...  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2014 12:31 PM Title: 'The Hospital ~Part Two'

So, all three men were "striped," huh? Would that be tiger-striped or zebra-striped?*


*LOL!

Author's Response:

Ha ha,... _  "SKUNK STRIPED!" ;`)  Another one that always slips past me is,... "Lose", and "Loose",... I always seem to mix those up too!

--- It's been corrected.  Thanks Cary!  Maybe Jane will thank you, 'properly', in the following chapters,...?   :0`

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have to agree that this is the best story - by far - on this site.  Well, spell check is an important thing.  Bad spelling helps dissuade suspension of disbelief.  This story has the capability of being elevated and converted into a screenplay.  

As for "suspension of disbelief", I don't think space marines would act as undisciplined as their dialog suggests, but I can let that slide.  Still, with some clean-up governed by an editor perhaps, this story, if embellished and cleaned-up a bit, could go mainstream and be made into a movie. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Man!  I can understand what you're saying about the misspelled words, and-  it is, 'sometimes 'distracting', but I'm just 'Playing it by ear', so to speak; Freestyle, for lack of a better word,  that's just how I write...  ('Spellcheck' is cheating, in my book)  I like a blank sheet of paper, with no bells and whistles...

Samuel Coleridge's original statement came into a restrictive clause:  "...that, 'willing'- suspension of disbelief, for the moment, which constitutes 'poetic faith', of necessity implies, that there are different sorts of 'suspension of disbelief' and specifies that, 'Poetic faith' is one instance of a larger class.

One need not choose to believe that it's real; or that the events are actually taking place,... more often than not, you know that what you're reading isn't real,... you only temporarily allow yourself to believe it...

.... for the sake of the fantasy itself.

Either way,.. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I hope that you can overlook the occasional misspellings, and continue to read on!  ;`)

Reviewer: littletoy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is the best thing going on this site right now IMO. Love the various situations the men find themselves in, and the way you emphasize the utter helplessness of their situation. Also I love that you don't just focus on feet. I love a good handheld scene, and you have those a-plenty! 

To those of you who are complaining about the spelling, why not just run spell check yourselves if it bothers you so much? I actually don't mind as it kind of adds to the author's voice in a way.

Please continue with more. And may earth be stupid enough to send out more ships to look for the missing ones. :P

 



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thanks Littletoy!  That really means something to me.  I've been hoping that this would eventually draw a review from you!  I really enjoy reading your stories and I'm sure that your style of writing has positively influenced mine,... i.e. 'Big Man on Campus': really loved that one,...

I hope that I too, can continue to improve and evolve into an accomplished writer.  This particular fantasy, (GTS), comes naturally for me, and I really love escaping into it's vast variations, and different scenarios of the fetish,... 

Although, currently, it's really the only thing that I'm interested in writing about.  I'm still discovering alot about myself, and how the fixation with the giantess fetish developes.  I play off of, the fact that most of the readers here are seeing things from the same perspective as I am,...

Which is really why I enjoy it so much!

Thanks again!  .... and please continue to follow this,... I really would appreciate it!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lol. That's not a spoiler! Every giantess in this story gets horny.

Author's Response:

Ha ha,..  Like I said;  "I wasn't going to release any 'Spoilers".  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 1:10 PM Title: 'The Hospital'

I agree with Dr. Harris about the sound of Rachel's voice. In my permanent opinion, there is no sound more agonizing--to the human male nervous system--than the giggling of young adult females. Especially the adolescent ones!

Author's Response:

Well, they're 'college-age', girls,... but still, very young looking... and their laughter sounds very 'adolescent-ish'!  I have to agree, that it's kinda like fingernails on a chalk-board, when they suddenly burst out,...

...and can you imagine, (at six inches tall) if you were standing on a stainless steel platform, and... their amplified voice was twelve times more powerful in sheer volume ? ? ?   .:0'

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 2:51 AM Title: 'The Hospital'

Love the change in scenery.

These 3 men get a free tour of the city and I like the detail you gave it. The part where there was a mom and a child, I wished that the mom could've taken one. She sounded interesting.

The men waiting for the doctor reminds me when a hot nurse leads you to a room and she leaves and u wait for your hot doctor to show up next.

I mean everyone sounds fit and attractive by the descriptions you gave them.

I wonder what the doctor will find after the experiments. I hope it's something bizarre, like a tiny man gets more stamina when he gets inserted in a vagina or somthing.

Either way, I can't to find out in the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Well Tom, I don't want to release any 'spoilers', and I can't say what will happen next, but,... Wow!  I even 'surprised' Myself with this next One!  :`)

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Dr. Harris suddenly gets very horny!   When she actually touchs one of the tiny men, it triggers something that she's had buried deep inside her for a long, long time! 

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2014 7:08 PM Title: 'The Hospital'

I like your work very much, but, please, spell check!!



Author's Response:

Tanks Man!  I well be vury watchfull of these misspellin's!  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2014 8:18 AM Title: 'Enlightenment'

Zena, in her over-confidence, made a mistake? Holy Agatha Christie!

Author's Response:

Maybe,... maybe, not- (or, nobody will really notice,..)  ...they're only six inches tall!  Lol! ;`)

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