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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 9:13 PM Title: 'The Rescue Mission'

Ha! Nice touch :) Something tells me the women there are going to have some new toys soon!

Fell behind, Jane on the Couch was awesome and my most favorite recent chapter but of course you knew that would be up my ally :)



Author's Response:

      Yeah, Janie's a real Charmer, she's the 'block', that Julianna was 'chipped' off from. ;`)

 Just a heads up; the coming chapters are mearly a set up, for what's going to happen 'after' the ship arrives on this 'new' planet earth.  Some of the crew will seem to be a pretty tough bunch, but,... we'll see what happens when they finally realize 'just where', they actually are!    _"*.*"_ 

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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 10:08 AM Title: 'The Rescue Mission'

Max, you coward! Get back in your seat. Or, Privates Ommick and Scribe will beat you till you look like you were clobbered with an ugly-stick!!

Seriously, though; this chapter was a real hoot. I especially loved the 1980's song reference! I can't wait to read how the ship winds up "drifting/falling" towards the surface of GTS-World. ;-)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 3:51 PM Title: 'Hide and Seek'

Geez, talk about luck. Marie always seems to be the one finding these tiny men.

Marie will probably bring them home and soon all 4 tinies meet. The tinies then collaborate and start building a radio and satellite hoping to get communication. However as they were building it, Jane shows up and her eyes glisten as she spots 4 little men at once.

Then Jane has her way with them and Marie shows up disgusted with her mom. Jane smiles back and asks Marie if she wants to try it. Marie immediately declined and takes all the tinies away from Jane and hide them in her room.

Jane, now a little diss appointed, asks Julianee to help her out. Julainne secretly sneaks into the house while Jane distracts Marie. Julianne snatches all 4 tinies and tried to sneak out but she remembers that she promised two of them to Jane. She doesn't care and takes all 4 with her and Jane is furious. Marie is now super furious for lack of a better word.

Now Jane and Marie plot to steal the tinies. They failed. Jane distracted Julianne but Marie couldn't find the tinies. Little did they know that Julianne kept a two tinies in each bra cup, one tied to the fornt of her panties and another to the back of her panties.

Marie then demands Julainne to give them but she refuses. Juliane replies that Marie has to go get them. Marie declines, but Jane thinks it will be worth it, so she starts ripping Julliane's clothes off shocking both Marie and Julianne.

Marie is disgusted in watching her mother strip her sister, so she tells them to stop. Marie makes a deal that she gets two tinies for finding them all, gives on to Jane and one to Julianne. They all reluctantly agree.

The end.

Man, this story is fun to talk about.

Author's Response:

The End???  Already??  ......   This is just the first HALF,  Dude! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 11:00 AM Title: 'Hide and Seek'

So much for Marie doing her civic duty! Something tells me _anyone_ who obeyed that giant President's directive would be more of an exception than a rule.

Author's Response:

Marie has four little guys in her care, now... and she'll have to start thinking about some place to keep all of them...

Maybe her mother, Jane,   will have some ideas about that?   ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 1:16 PM Title: Jane on the Couch

Woooo! What a wild ride for these travelers! You were right, Jane still building on her reputation.

Lots of detail, I like it. You even mentioned Jim's memory of Julianne and how it as affected him. It's interesting that Jim doesn't resist anymore. Almost like he is willing to be tortured sexually.

Jane's sexiest chapter yet! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 12:32 PM Title: Jane on the Couch

Something tells me their troubles with Jane are still not all "behind" them.

;-D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 2:35 PM Title: 'Headline News!'

This is a very important chapter. It tells me that a lot more is about to happen.

As for suggestions, I was wondering if a school teacher could get a tiny. A woman similar to Julianne, because Julainne is the best character. If Julainne gets a tiny again, that would also be awesome. The school teacher could also have similar methods of pleasure that Julainne is into. She could take the tiny to school inside her clothing and play with him during breaks or even during class!

About the headlines. Why 'captured'? Why not rescued? You would think that the women in that world would be suspicious if they read it like that.

What happened to Jane? She isn't that horny as I thought she would be. I thought she would make up for Julainne in these chapters, but she is sort of teasing Jim and Sam with her mouth and nipples. Hopefully things get juicy later on.

The reporter seems hot. That was quite a vivid description of her. Doesn't she have the 3 tinier right now, or do the scientists have them? I know your writing well enough Wildcat. You described the reporter enough to convince me that she wil have possession of a tiny soon.

What happened to that family who put Sam on a cake, did they just dissapear? They probably thought that SamuEl escaped anyway.

I wonder what is going to happen at the park when everyone literally shows up there?

It should be interesting in the next few chapters. I can't wait!

Author's Response:

"Captured",... because the tiny men where desparately, trying to get away from the giants!  Good or Bad, they have no idea what's happened to them, and being that small, their terrified of these gigantic females...

Jane is still just as naughty as before.  Maybe even 'more so',... I'll continue the next chapter, right where this one left off; (Just to prove that Jane's still Got It!)

Marie still works at the Coffee Shop, (The one that Big Brenda Owns,... remember?) Big Brenda, and her two daughter's, might have another chapter or two, I haven't got to that point yet,...

Don't want to give too much away,.. but there's alot more to come!  ;`)

Good suggestions Tom!   Thanks, for the additional side note,  ( I didn't fully realize that I 'built-up' that News Reporter, all that much!  But, yes,...she might become another player in this fantasy....

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 11:53 AM Title: 'Headline News!'

Jane is becoming a real pain in the astronautical section (lol).

Author's Response:

'Astro- Nomically' Lol!  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 7:59 AM Title: Bill's New Owner

Well, I guess we can be pretty sure that Jen's not taking him back to the hairdresser!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, ok. Now that makes sense.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2014 9:41 PM Title: Bill's New Owner

Ok, now the mom finally seems sexy! When Jennifer was introduced, she didnt seem that hot, but now, I like her attitude.

Im confused on this one part of this chapter. You said Bill had awakened to be wrapped up inisde the tight stockings, with Jennifer's toe wrapped up around Bill's head and face. My question is, when did he get moved from the toe to the backside of her skirt? I must have missed something.

Anyway, this was an important chapter despite its length.

Since Julianne doesnt have a tiny at the moment, Im rooting for Jane and Jim's interaction. Its the most interesting pne for me right now.

I cant for the double header next chapter!

Author's Response:

No, actually Bill was inside the glass bowl.  Jenny was trampling him with her stocking foot.  He passes out, then when he awakens, he slowly realizes that he has been dropped down into the stocking,... Jenny took her stockings off.  Wrapped him up inside it, and then,  she tucked him into her skirt, for safe keeping.  ;`)

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 11:29 AM Title: 'A Little Bit of R & R'

Yes! Finally we get back to Jane. For some reason, I don't think Jane will do much to Jim since Julianne broke him down.

As for Billy, I initially wanted Ann's mom to take him, but the mother doesn't seem that hot, so I would rather have Ann keep him, and maybe Becky comes over with her mom. Haha.

The next should be interesting. I can't wait!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 9:17 AM Title: 'A Little Bit of R & R'

Jim is once again a victim of "sextortion." And, as for Billy Bob? I think his punishment will be to get farmed out to her mother.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2014 7:37 PM Title: 'A Little Bit of R & R'

I may be biased but Im loving Marie right now. Its obvious she gets some kind of weird pleasure from playing "giantess mommy" with the little men but at least shes kind to them and tends to their needs!

I kind of want some steamy action with Marie, I feel that if ANY giantess deserves it, itd be her! Maybe she can coax the little men to have sex with her instead of forcing herself on them. Considering how angelic shes been with them, (not to mention shes young and beautiful) and I think theres a good chance they'd be willing!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 10:08 PM Title: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

Rats! Was hoping Juli would keep Jim, oh well, we'll see what Marie has in store for them now that she has the 2 of them back. That Jim is one tough hombre!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 10:03 PM Title: 'Ann's Little Surprise'

Glad to see that Ann has a devilish side too! Some good old foot domination, can't complain about that. Don't know if you plan on having any of the crew perish but I'm putting my money on Bill being the unlucky one, he seems to be in the most dangerous situation. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 3:26 PM Title: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

Hmm, Sam got frightened very easily by Jane's mouth. How does he react to being inserted into other places?

Aw, why did Julianne give up Jimmy? Well atleast they hade their fun. I hope Julianne captures that guy from the mall.

So Marie has two tiny people with her. It wont be long until either Jane or Julianne snatch Jim or Sam back up.

I cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 9:22 AM Title: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

Uh-oh! It sounds like Marie is about to prove herself one of those close-fallen acorns. Or, is it apples?

Btw: the correct spellings are "scared," "considering," and "truly."

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 8:40 AM Title: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

For the sake of this story, do not make Marie out to be just like all the others. I'm still disappointed that Ann ended up being so cruel.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2014 9:46 AM Title: 'Ann's Little Surprise'

Maybe Jennifer will be a law-abiding citizen and give Bill back to Valerie (his true "owner").

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