Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2015 11:49 AM Title: 'It's a Small, Small, World'

Your writing is always excellent. You do a good job of making it fresh. I would have liked for him to think everything was normal. Everything was his size again for a bit longer. Great story though. Always looking forward to Zena maxwell. I hope you do some more size comparisons.
Thanks,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks Diesel!  Yeah, I enjoy 'comparisons' too.  There will be more of it, when we get back to Anez's chapter. ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 1:11 AM Title: 'It's a Small, Small, World'

If I had to grade your chapter, I would give it an A.

I think the hardest part in this story is trying to get some background on each character since there are so many of them.

The details of Missy's life was very well explained. Obviously you put a lot of effort into this one.

Nice teaser; leather boots, a whip. Kinda read resembles a mistress.......(lightbulb appears)

I wonder if she is into bondage. She could tie me up anyday.

I'm curious where you are going with all this film stuff. I guess I will find out later.

Also, I love the description you gave Missy. A shy but confident girl. Also a grad student. Could it get any better!

I can't wait til we return to Missy and Tom!

Of course, Zena and Max hadn't been seen for a long time. So I can see why they are next.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom,... Yeh, this one was slightly rushed.  I could have made it much longer, and gone into more detail.