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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 12:10 AM Title: 'Scorning the Goddess'

Ahh, a cliffhanger. It would be lame if she killed him. And plus it not like there is a unlimited out of the tiny dudes.

Author's Response:

Haha, yeh,.. but Julianna, is undoubtedly an 'unpredictable' blonde beauty, and she's liable to do just about anything!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 9:44 PM Title: 'Scorning the Goddess'

Ha! There is no way that Julianna would just kill her toy just like that!

She just got him from Marie.

I believe that she will step over him, like he is below the arch of her shoe, so he still lives, but gets quite a scare.

I liked the tickling concept, becuase of how much cruelty and control Julianna has. It really makes her queen of torture.

Captain Jim's torture was freaking sexy though, and this wasnt. So, This torture has to be paired up with other things. I just cant believe that Julianna would finish Cary like that when there are many other things to do before he dies.

Julianna was watching Jane torment Ajet, and she was getting horny. I didnt expect a tickling chapter, but I hope its like a setup for something else.

Orrrr!!! Perhaps this is a way that Julianna will find a new tiny! Maybe she does kill Cary! Maybe she finds a little tiny called Tom, hehe.

Otherwise, I find no other reason for her to kill Cary. Jane will probably be dissapointed. Marie will be angry.

My guess is that she just scares him and doesnt kill him. She loves to torment, not kill. She even spared Capt. Jimmy's life.

Nice try Wildcatman, but I believe Cary lives. The real fun begins next chapter. I cant wait!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  After this next chapter, we'll check back in with Major Tom and see how he's holding out!  :`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 8:20 AM Title: 'Scorning the Goddess'

I knew the beeyotch would double-cross me--er, him--at the last second!

Author's Response:

Yes, she's quite the 'devious 0ne', she could have continued to tickle torture that tiny man for the entire night!  Especially, with her mother urging her on,... the two of them together like that would be a very Dangerous situation for a six inch man!

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