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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 7:28 AM Title: 'Flashback'

1) Don't sweat it, re: LIFE'S "LITTLE" IRONIES. You did me a favor in disguise, as I'd grown bored with that story, anyway! And, I suspect more than half of my otherwise loyal lurkers had, as well.

2) It looks like Jennifer unintentionally put Billy Bob out of his misery. Ergo; it looks like Valerie will have to declare bankruptcy as a man-broker.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 1:46 AM Title: 'Flashback'

Wow, not exactly one of the most exciting chapters but definitely one of the deepest chapters in this story.

When I look at this chapter as a whole, it is indeed a flashback, but much more than that. You even mentioned more detail than the chapters about Billy. The types of customers, made me realize how sad his life has become. He hated farts so much that he would rather get abused. It makes his every breath worth it, but he enjoyed breathing his last. His torment is over.

Bill never had a sexy giantess. He was first abused by that Salon woman, then abused by the teenagers, then abused by Jennifer who put him out of his misery.

Captain Jim on the other hand got all the sexy giantesses. He had Marie, then Julianne, then Jane. Those are my 3 favorite giantesses and Jim got used by them all. Lucky guy.

With Billy gone, we start looking at who is left. Marie has 4, Zena has 1, there are 3 in the cage, a teen girl has 1, and ....I think that's it.

"When one door closes, another one opens." Bill's story has finished, but who do we visit next? I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 1:38 AM Title: 'Flashback'

Wait did she kill Bob on purpose or was it an accident? It wasn't too clear at the end there...If she DID kill him on purpose, well, she's kinda stupid considering how much a commodity men are in this world.

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