[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 12:39 PM Title: 'Unknown'
Oh hell yeah, shes definitely has to do that again! Been waiting for someone to get eaten since the cake batter scene :)
I agree, it was necessary for poor Tim to meet his end, the story needed a little more edge, the danger didn't quite feel so dangerous anymore because you pretty much figured theyd survive whatever was happening to them. Now you've intorduced a whole nother level to the story. Good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks Max! Now that I've crossed over,... This is going to get a whole lot, Hotter!
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[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 12:26 PM Title: 'Unknown'
Whapft the frig...? She was just teasing him?! That merciless minx. Come to think of it. That would make a great title for a Saturday morning cartoon!
"Marcy the Minx. That merciless, merciless minx!
When she stuffs you in her facial cheeks, then begin the oral hijinks!"
Author's Response:
Tim E. Scribe, would be right in his 'element', would he 'Not?'
[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 12:38 AM Title: 'Unknown'
So those were Tim's clothes that the researchers found in the trash can!
And wow, a vore scene! And she wants to do that again? Then there will be no more tines! Well, we shall see.
Hey wildcat, what age are these girls? They seem like 11 yrs olds, but they wear yoga pants? I would like to know their age.
So how many tiny people are there? Marie has 4, Jennifer has 1, Tim died, Tom is in a pocket, Max is in another pocket, and there were a few other guys.
Also, it's getting hard to keep track of these giantesses, especially when most of them have blonde hair. Lately, u discussed the reporter, these little girls, and now Marcy. I'm gonna get Marcy and Marie mixed up soon.
Since the helicopter has arrived, I wonder how these sexy officers deal with the remaining tinies.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Look for the next chapter around wed. of next wk, and,... Have a great weekend!