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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 6:22 AM Title: 'Devoured'

Heck yeah! Now this is the best part of the story! Julianne's treatment of Jim.

Its so sexy!

She forces him to worship her vagina continulously as she goes along her day, enjoying little Jim please her.

Next, Julianne should tape Jim up like a mummy, and gag him. Then she should insert him. The ultimate form of helplessness in my book.

I just keep picturing these blue satin panties and with Jim tied up to it forever. I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 12:53 PM Title: 'Devoured'

Sadly, I don't think there's any "could be" about it. :-(

Author's Response:

Ah but, you never really know....Jim's a tough cookie, and it'll take alot more than an angry pussy to snuff him out!  Lol!  ;`)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2014 8:24 PM Title: 'Devoured'

Holly crap, dude, that was freaking awesome! I don't know, not looking good for him, thats going to be tough to survive. But heck, if he does, hope she just continues to wear him in her panties and use him just as she has been doing :)

Fantastic chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  Much appreciated man,.... always look forward to your view!  ;`)

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