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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 9:39 PM Title: 'A Crude Awakening'

Hell, wish I could be woken up like that! I was waiting for Jane to have a little fun with him :)

 

Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  I think there is a few more chapters yet to come... ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 12:34 PM Title: 'A Crude Awakening'

I almost forgot about Jane. Im surprised she didnt use Sam as a sex toy before calling Marie. Sam just got licked and sucked on. Not that crude in my opinion.

Now we get to hear about Ann. For some reason, I want her to run away with Billy and or her to keep Billy to herself.

Or, Ann has some fun, and then Brittiany comes back and they go to Beckys house where they meet her mom. Then the mom is both mature, sexy, and smart enough to snatch Billy amd hide him in some steamy tight places.

Speaking of steamy tight places, I absolutley cant wait to read more about Jullianne and Jimmy. Last time we saw them, Jimmy promised Julianne to do anything for her. All the ideas in her head must probably be making Jimmy all soaked up right now. Those Satin panties are perfect!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2014 1:52 PM Title: 'A Crude Awakening'

This definitely gave new meaning to the Spanish term, "Orale'!"

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