[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 8:23 AM Title: Condemned~Part Two : 'Breakfast at Brittany's'
A glimmering of hope? A rarity in this sub-genre.
Author's Response:
As long as Captain Jim Strum, can still take a breath,... all hope shall not be lost! ;`)
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 11:46 PM Title: Condemned~Part Two : 'Breakfast at Brittany's'
He gets somewhat of a break for now. At least it won't be like last chapter. Plus he sucks at escaping. Can't wait, things are heating up in a good way.
Author's Response:
Thanks! F.H. , "Sucks at escaping".... Funny! ;`)
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 9:23 PM Title: Condemned~Part Two : 'Breakfast at Brittany's'
Ann seems all nice but I think Bill may be in trouble with the lust she is feeling towards him. Also will be fun to see what Becky does since Bittany doesn't feel she can be trusted *weg*
Author's Response:
Becky's the 'mean one', Bill had better keep his head down around her!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 11:41 AM Title: Condemned~Part Two : 'Breakfast at Brittany's'
Ok, this chapter, although not much happened, had some good ideas for the future.
Ann seems so mysterious that I cant tell what she is going to do with Bill.
Brittany seemed to change from an obsessed teen, to a "whatever" kind of teen.
With her attitude, i thought for sure that she was going to bring Bill to the dentist with her.
Then again, you mention Ann's thoughts a lot so its obvious that she was going to have some fun with Bil.
Becky mentioned going to her mom's house later. You probably already know that Im a MILF fan, so I got a little interested there. It doesnt seem like Bill would go there with them, but I hope they do. ;)
Next chapter, I hope is a return to the sexy Julianne! I hope Jimmy stays tied up for the entire chapter! Julianne could do her daily activities with Jimmy in her panties. She could drvie, go shopping, yoga, go to work in some tight outfit, and a lot more activites to spice things up. :)
The story is getting deep! I just cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Wow, Thanks Tom! Yeah, Brittany just likes to be the one 'in-charge' of everybody. Once she had captured him, and had Bill in her possession, the thrill of the hunt was over. But, she's the one 'still' in charge.. and she calls all the shots! Ha!
Okay, Julianna's next up on the 'Porn channel', and if there was a tag for 'XXX', it would most likely have to be used!
*I've already got most of the next chapter roughed out, and it might be up later tonight, no promises though...
Thanks again Tom! ;`)