Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2014 9:19 PM Title: 'Condemned'

Now thats my kind of torture! So is that what Brittany promised to due at the end of last chapter? Suck on him? Thats more enjoyable then what I thought was in store for him, ha. 

Author's Response:

Yea, you don't know how close he came, to getting devoured alive... but, I reconcidered, when I thought of a little something else that I wanted to try....

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 1:03 PM Title: 'Condemned'

OK! So let me see if I have it straight, now. Billy Bob was not stolen from the salon at the end of chapter 8. Merely taken, for a short time, to another part of it by the daughter of the snobbish customer who had paid to have some "extra time" with him. Once that time was up, Valerie got him back from those two. Which makes this trio a whole new kettle of fish. Correct?*

*Hey! At least you know I'm paying attention to the story.

Author's Response:

You're right, I re-read that part, and I could've made that scene a bit more detailed.  The mother quickly rescued him from her tormenting little girl and revived him in the sink, (at the Salon) and he was then returned to his 'Mistress' Valerie....

Sorry 'bout that, Cary.  *But thanks for pointing that out... after editing these chapters several times, It sometimes becomes camouflaged within my scene, and it takes a fresh set of eyes to catch something like that....

I'm sure that you know what I'm talking about...  ;`)