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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 8:17 PM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two

Just got caught up on this, thanks so much for writing this, Wildcat! There is a serious lack of stories that appeal to my taste right now on this site. This was probably my favorite chapter so far, I think I am in love with Julianna, shes everything a giantess should be! Jim is going to have a tough time surviving this, I envy the poor bastard :)

Honorable mention to chapter 6, pudding scene was amazing. The only crtique I might have, and I hate critiquing your stories because they are so awesome but it just felt like she should have ate him but it was still damn good. 

Yes, please, definitely keep writing this! 

 

 



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks a lot Max!  You've no idea, just what your view means to me!  I know we have a very similar taste in the fantasy, and... as it is, there's very few of us out there...

Thanks so much for the comment. I was starting to get bogged down, but now... after your encouragement, I suddenly feel revamped!  ;`)

Hope that you continue to follow, and as aways, I look forward to your opinion and input! 

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 11:40 AM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two

WHOA! Fantastic!

Yes! Keep going with this!

I think the next chapter should be with one of the other tinys, but I love what Julianne is doing to Jimmy.

Sexy girl, sexy ideas. I like it.

As for cruel punishments...stepping on a tiny and living is worse. This panty trap on the other hand is much better, in terms of comfort and sexiness. (but thats just my opinion.). :)

I hope Julianne keeps him there for a very long time. He wanted to eat muffins, well he should eat her out. There is plenty in there, hehe.

I wonder what happens when Jimmy blows his load? Will travel far inside her? Perhaps not. She might flush it all away on him with an orgasm soon. haha.

Anyway, im glad you are back. Computer problems are indeed annoying.

I once was writing a chapter, and i lost connection for 20 seconds, so when i tried to submit it, the page refreshed, and I lost the chapter. :(

Im glad your computer is fixed now. Must have been quite a relief for you. Im also glad this story is back and running.

These chapters are getting sexier and sexier!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  I'd hoped that I didn't disappoint... I put alot of effort into that chapter, and there were several 're-writes'.  I must have changed that chapter five or six times before I felt that it was just right!  ;`)

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 9:01 AM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two

WHOA!

Author's Response:

Yee Haw!   Thanks Cary!  ;`)

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 8:09 PM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two

Oh the slow torture!

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks SaftyPin,  Glad your into it!

I'll try and keep the slow pace going.  It's a constant battle to jump forward to the good stuff, but... I'm fightin' it!  ;`)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 4:42 PM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two

I loved the chapter very sexy! I kinda think its odd how badly some of these females treat their little men considering how rare even normal sized men are! What if they die, and of starvation even?

How much food can one of these tiny men really need? I dont know, it just seems like it would be such a waste for something so rare to die just because...And so far the majority of the females have been terrible to their little men!

Im not just saying this cuz I like gentle, its because of how rare men are in that world that it kinda doesnt make sense how badly some of the girls treat them. Other than that odd point this story had been a blast to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Gadget!  Actually, I thought that, they weren't Really, all that 'Mean'.... just, very playful and humiliateing, towards the weaker sex.  (Except for the giantess in chapter 1 that just simply stomped on them) they're really just a bunch of 'Big Teasers'...

Although, Sam was a very lucky little man...to get away from Elsa and Giselle, because they definitely would have eaten him alive!  ;`)

Thanks for the support, and I'm glad that your into it!   Always look forward to your opinion, always need some good feedback from other authors such as yourself.

Thanks again!

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