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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 8:49 AM Title: 'Escape/ Entrapment'

"Out of the batter bowl; into the purse." Not bad. That expression could really catch on!

Author's Response:

Bitter Batter, Butter... or, Butter Batter, tastes so Bitter?  Peanut Butter, Batter Better?  Naw, just Good ol' chocolate Pudding!  ;`)

Thanks Cary! 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 9:24 PM Title: 'Escape/ Entrapment'

These little dudes just can't catch a break can they? Good for us though XP.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 3:43 PM Title: 'Escape/ Entrapment'

A little recap here.

Jimmy still stuck in Julianne's panties.

Sam stuck inside Marie's purse.

Bill stolen by a little girl.

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Ok, so I hope Julianne ties Jimmy to her panties literally, like threading his limbs to the fabric of her panties. Becuase thats my definition of a panty trap. What you did was my second favorite idea which I call sex with a giantess. Many people write about it, but few write it using panties to trap the tiny to her. Now I hope she wakes with a long day work, and ties him to her underwear. Now that will be hot. I want Julianne to be a panties expert.(Just adding sexy ideas to your wildcat head. :)

Marie lost Jimmy, but got Sam. I am glad you decided to go this way, becuase over time, i didnt like Elsa and her family. Im not a fan of chubby fingers as my image of a giantess. Juliane is my favorite giantess, and Marie is my second, so im glad those two now have tiny men and not Elsa.
I think Marie is the caring type and she would be a great bra expert.

Finally, we have Bill with this little girl. However, im not focused on the little girl. im focused on her mother. The little girl might play dolls with him or somthing, but i dont know her age, so i assume she is a preteen or younger. This mother though seems interesting. Im a fan of MILF's and no, im not thinking of a tiny's own mother. Im tired of reading about stories where the mother is having fun with her son. It makes me feel weird, so im glad you didnt do that. I like what you are doing and writing about these random mothers that I can use my imagination to be as sexy as they can be. I hope this mother is a sexy giantess who is also caring and will treat Bill like a husband. I hope she will kiss him often, and maybe one day shove Bill in her panties hoping for an unforgettable experience.

Well, thats my suggestion which I hope you do write about. Its your story, so no pressure, but I hope my ideas do give you some more ideas that I like. :)

Author's Response:

Now that's what I call a 'Review'! 

 Bill was captured by the young girl for only, just a few minutes,..( I just like using that type of situation to show how vulnerable you would be at that size.)  And, Her mother took him away from her and revived him. She won't be allowed to play with him anymore... I guess, it's a type of humiliation factor, but it general shows how dangerous it would be...

 Bill wasn't stolen away from Valerie, she still has him.  He couldn't get away from her that easy! ;`)

Julianna has one of those sewing kits.  She likes to add costume jewelry to her dresses and jeans.  She might find some use for it, with a pair of silk panties that she really likes to wear... she wears them all the time.  Last time time she wore them for three days before taking them off! 

Jim might have to get used to the idea of being cramped up inside her pockets, and other tight places...

We'll see what happens next chapter!  Thanks Tom!

Oh Yeah, I really hate those (Mother and Son) storys too!  Turns my stomach!

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