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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 11:03 AM Title: 'Expectation'

"But, I don't think that she'll mind. Just bring him back when you're through with him."

Yeah, right. Like either of those things are really going to happen. Jim has a better chance of being beamed up by a rescue ship, from Earth, prior to Julianne getting back to her place with him!*

*Which is about the same chance I have of winning the MEGABUCKS FOR LIFE LOTTERY on the very first try. ;-)

Author's Response:

Don't forget about Marie....  She's gunna be pissed!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 10:12 PM Title: 'Expectation'

I change my mind. Elsa is not my favorite character that I said from chapter 1. Now its Julianne.

I love her attitude and hiw she bound Jimmy up like that. And how did you know that I like pantie traps?!! I didnt mention it here. I guess you saw a review I made on another story.

Also, a tiny being bound is super hot to me. At first I thought why is pantie trap titled for chapter 7, but not chapter 6. Then i realized that chapter 6 will be about Samuel and chapter 7 will return to Jimmy. Perfect!

As for the jumping back and forth part, I didnt mind that, but I did mind once I had to learn a few more names to the story. Instead of being confused as to which tiny and giantess you were talking about, I got confused when you mentioned a new character and then jumped around. But no need to worry about that since now I know all of them.

Samuel's turn is next. Cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yup, I read one of your reviews on another story, and I remembered it.  (I like that kinda thing too!)  ;`)

Yeah, there won't be anymore 'additional' charactors in this tale.  Elsa and Giselle has Sam.  Valerie has Bill.  Jane, HAD Jim, but now,  her older daughter Julianne has him, and I don't think that he's EVER going to get away from HER...

Marie's Not going to give up though, she's going to want her littleman Back!

 

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