[Report This]Date: July 09 2014 10:46 AM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'
If I were Capt. Strum, and had a giant nympho mihf like Jane hovering over me? I would have opted to stay in the coffee shop during the bug spraying!
Author's Response:
Nooo, Not.... "R.A.I.D!" '*-*'
[Report This]Date: June 30 2014 2:54 AM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'
Great start! Continue please, you write good stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tylby! I'll keep going, if you keep reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 29 2014 11:36 PM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'
90 percent female, wouldn't mind that. Maybe in the next life.
Nice chapter can wait for the next.
Author's Response:
Ah, the next life... be careful what you wish for. If it actually happened to you, would you be lucky enough to end up with a gentle one? Hopefully... ;`)
[Report This]Date: June 29 2014 4:37 PM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'
Much better descriptions of Jane. I like her attitude and her sexual behaviour.
Funny, I just read this story about a bunch of ideas and one had a proposed idea about a world that was 90% female. Is this that story that developed from that idea? If it is, you are doing a great job. It feels like 100% female in Girth. haha.
For the next chapter, I know it will involve Elsa and Samuel, and I know u mentioned that she is overweight. Well, im thinking of her as a person who just finished a weightloss program and now she is a fit, sexy mom. (Just a suggestion, unless you stil want her to be overweight.)
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Dude, it's gunna get a-lot better. There's a few 'up's an down's', for these poor guys, and the best is yet to come! ;`)
I might have to add some additional 'tags' to this, as the story progresses... there seems to be some very interesting things that happen to these guys. Some very strange things too...
[Report This]Date: June 29 2014 2:08 PM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'
SO not only are the crew men in on a planet full of females but they are also tiny! It kinda makes that woman that was squashing them earlier on in the story seem like a stupid person. I mean she could have just taken them and sold them for a hefty price or something! Ahh well.
Awesome story wildcat, I'd been missing your work!
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadget, Glad you're into it! Selling them? Not until chapter four.... ;`)