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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oops. Forgot to rate this chapter.

Also, I like the title. Julianna's Web. And Jim is definately trapped in it.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Part of me wants to trade places with Jim. :)

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

You kind of starting losing my interest after Juliana took him from her sister.  I agree, if men are so rare, then why are they treating them so badly.  Hopefully Marie can get him back in one piece.  But she'll probably have to earn his trust all over again.



Author's Response:

Thanks Riczar,  I think Marie will get him back, although... he might be a little bit worn out!  ;`)

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

where did wildcatman go? Its been a while. You must be busy att he moment so take your time.

I hope you come back soon, becuase you left me a very encouraging reply to my review. Probably the sexiest reply I recveived from a review ever.

Anyway, I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oops. I forgot this story is from another story from a memory. Nevermind my suggestions, but if the sexy stuff can be changed, then I would be happy to read about it. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you are right Carycomic. I hope Julianne keeps Jim for a long time. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh. im sorry. I just read your reply to my review. If you cant change it, that is fine.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

If there were only six survivors (including the Narrator), then only two--not three--could/should have been squashed by the teenage giantess, following Dickie's death and the capture of the first marine by that African-American giantess. Aside from that one nitpick, I am sufficiently intrigued enough, by this opening chapter, that I will be here for ch. 2!

Author's Response:

Yeah, you're right.  I actually tried to have her stomp two of them, and then.. one of them was still alive, so she has to 're-stomp' him; finish him off...

Although, I didn't quite, word it that way, did I? Glad you're following, I always look forward to your input!  ;`)  Thanks Cary! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like this story. A nice setup with touches of sexy stuff. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  Glad you're on board!  I'll try and post each chapter within about 3 or 4 days,  no more then a week between them.  Don't worry, it's gonna get a whole lot better...

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this so far! I'm eager for more, I've always been a fan of your stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks Gadget!  This one, will be mostly gentle, but... I might get carried away,... LOL! ;`)  You know me... *

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nether good or bad, well mostly good though. Just think it's a interesting story. Like a giantess/twisted version of Cinderella. Which I don't mind.

Glad your back writing. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope to spin out about fifteen or twenty chapters for this one.  I'm going to solely focus on this one until it's complete.  Hope that you continue to enjoy, and respond with some feedback, thanks for commenting!

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