Date: April 12 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
When is the next chapter coming out?
Date: April 05 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Are we ever going to get another installment???
Date: January 23 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hope to see a new chapter soon. This story is the best
Author's Response:
Thanks Starlord73! I'll try and stay at it! I've had several distractions here lately, so,... please bare with me,...
Date: January 22 2015 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this....great writing. This chapter definitely sucks you in. I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response:
Thanks Anez! I hope that you like the rest of it Too!
Date: January 06 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just wanted to say that it is really good the way you show things from the Giantess perspective and also from the tiny guy perspective. It is also great when it reveals details about something else.
Great writing,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks Diesel, I've tried seperating the p.o.v. of the giantess, from the shrinkee, by writing seperate chapters for each. And, I've read other author's work where they do an excellent job of it, (JackSmith, for one) but, I've found that the way that I write, it seems to work better if I blend it together within the same chapter.
Although, it seems that I have to slow the pace of the story way down, and it feels like nothings actually happening, so I sometimes switch back and forth, and use both methods. I guess, that it really depends on what's actually taking place within that particular chapter, before I decide which way to write it...
Thanks for the compliment, I appreciate it very much!
Date: December 23 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dear god I hope the next chapter comes out soon
Date: November 30 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
¿¿¿¡¡¡Next chapter!!!???
Date: November 16 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
We need an update!! Chop! Chop! my good man. Chop! Chop!
(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chop_chop_(phrase))
Date: November 08 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have to agree that this is the best story - by far - on this site. Well, spell check is an important thing. Bad spelling helps dissuade suspension of disbelief. This story has the capability of being elevated and converted into a screenplay.
As for "suspension of disbelief", I don't think space marines would act as undisciplined as their dialog suggests, but I can let that slide. Still, with some clean-up governed by an editor perhaps, this story, if embellished and cleaned-up a bit, could go mainstream and be made into a movie.
Author's Response:
Thanks Man! I can understand what you're saying about the misspelled words, and- it is, 'sometimes 'distracting', but I'm just 'Playing it by ear', so to speak; Freestyle, for lack of a better word, that's just how I write... ('Spellcheck' is cheating, in my book) I like a blank sheet of paper, with no bells and whistles...
Samuel Coleridge's original statement came into a restrictive clause: "...that, 'willing'- suspension of disbelief, for the moment, which constitutes 'poetic faith', of necessity implies, that there are different sorts of 'suspension of disbelief' and specifies that, 'Poetic faith' is one instance of a larger class.
One need not choose to believe that it's real; or that the events are actually taking place,... more often than not, you know that what you're reading isn't real,... you only temporarily allow yourself to believe it...
.... for the sake of the fantasy itself.
Either way,.. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I hope that you can overlook the occasional misspellings, and continue to read on! ;`)
Date: November 08 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is the best thing going on this site right now IMO. Love the various situations the men find themselves in, and the way you emphasize the utter helplessness of their situation. Also I love that you don't just focus on feet. I love a good handheld scene, and you have those a-plenty!
To those of you who are complaining about the spelling, why not just run spell check yourselves if it bothers you so much? I actually don't mind as it kind of adds to the author's voice in a way.
Please continue with more. And may earth be stupid enough to send out more ships to look for the missing ones. :P
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks Littletoy! That really means something to me. I've been hoping that this would eventually draw a review from you! I really enjoy reading your stories and I'm sure that your style of writing has positively influenced mine,... i.e. 'Big Man on Campus': really loved that one,...
I hope that I too, can continue to improve and evolve into an accomplished writer. This particular fantasy, (GTS), comes naturally for me, and I really love escaping into it's vast variations, and different scenarios of the fetish,...
Although, currently, it's really the only thing that I'm interested in writing about. I'm still discovering alot about myself, and how the fixation with the giantess fetish developes. I play off of, the fact that most of the readers here are seeing things from the same perspective as I am,...
Which is really why I enjoy it so much!
Thanks again! .... and please continue to follow this,... I really would appreciate it! ;`)
Date: November 07 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lol. That's not a spoiler! Every giantess in this story gets horny.
Author's Response:
Ha ha,.. Like I said; "I wasn't going to release any 'Spoilers". ;`)
[Report This]Date: October 18 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a good story for the most part although 1) spellchecking is desperately needed 2) I think there's some inconsistency about the number of dead in the early chapters 3) some grammar issues at times that can lead to confusion. Overall, this is a good story though!
Author's Response:
........ "desperately", 'needed'? I don't think there's That, many spelling errors! You may find a few, but, hey,... I'm doing this on 'Notepad', So....
I might miss a key stroke occasionally, but... I wouldn't say that it's "desparately" needed,... you make it sound like it's really bad. How many misspelled words did you find?
Overall,... good huh? and yet only two stars? Thanks for the review, I Think,... :/
Date: October 06 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
@gadget, I think it was an accident. She said "argh" at the end, which I think meant that she was angry at herself for killing him.
[Report This]Date: October 01 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
@Maximus. Wildcat is purposely putting us in the story. Since I'm Tom, WildCat read my fantasy mind and now I'm trapped in a hot teenage girl's panties. She is crossing her legs and getting me worn out.
For you, Wildcat made yourself captured by as ena Maxell. I'm sure you will have great time. I want to read about it in the next chapter, right Wildcat? :)
Date: September 24 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Also, I forgot to mention your readers Jimbob and Maximus. They seem to represent Capt. Jim and Max.
You put us all in there on purpose, didn't you? Lol
Author's Response:
Now that you mention it, I ~ 'Do' ~ see the similarities... ;`)
Date: August 24 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, ok. Now that makes sense.
Date: August 17 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story, but the many different encounters at different locations kind of confuse me. Unless they are planned to lead to crossing point in the end where all actions flow into a single situation of some sort, i dont see the reason behind this, could have been a seperate story for each giantess, even..oh well.
But the insolence of Maries mother was really heavy. She dares to ask her daughter for keeping the second mini-man because her daughter already got one, knowingly that she gave it away to Julianna :D
Date: August 14 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wasn't she supposed to return Jim the night before?
Author's Response:
Well, Julianna doesn't really listen to anyone else. She does her own 'thang'!!!
;`) Thanks JimBob !
Date: August 13 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This needs more butt action >w<
Author's Response:
Cool. We'll see... ;`)
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
one of the few stories I am currently following on giantessworld. I like the world and I like the characters but sometimes it's hard to follow and remember all the different players in the story. maybe you can add something in the chapter notes? like the names of each characters who will be in the current chapter. it's just a suggestion it's not necesarry but as more chapters get put out it gets harder to remember
Author's Response:
Good suggestion! I'll do that.... It would be a whole lot easier to follow, especially after several chapters, and the story begins to develop into a short novel... Thanks Mr E ! Appreciate the review!