[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 11:33 AM Title: Ramona Part 4: Growing Pains
Excellent work. I like Ramona's relationship with Greg. I feel a bit sorry for Mary, but she seems to be holding up ok.
Author's Response:
Mary's doing okay. Seeing as she's not elevated she probably won't get a story in this series but might be a recurring side character. Depends on who I chose next.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 10:30 AM Title: Ramona Part 4: Growing Pains
Great to see you back :).
Enjoyed this chapter a good bit. Watching Ramona adjust in a world that isn't quite used to elevation and with little idea as to how to support people going through it is an interesting is an interesting thing, and I particularly enjoyed the look at the better...insight, that elevation bestows.
Also good to see some familiar faces. Poor Sheila :(
Author's Response:
The world hasn't quite figured out what's going on yet. The title shouldn't be new world it should be "Old world that's almost new but not yet maybe in two years or something" But that was too long.
Poor Sheila? Feel bad for the chump who got his leg broken. I wonder who he was? Probably no one important.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2014 2:38 AM Title: Ramona Part 4: Growing Pains
I was just about to say that lol.
'Now you're John Hammond' - Ian Malcolm.
Great chapter.
Aaron
Author's Response:
You were to busy worrying if you could you didn't stop to think if you should.-Ian Malcolm