[Report This]Date: July 21 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
Sounds as if Pete might be afraid his good fortune, thus far, is literally too good to be true.
Date: July 20 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Another great chapter, I really look forward to this development and how far you'll take this. The telepotation is interesting me, I mean, no sound or flashes. NOTHING to indicate that it's there other than joseph's reaction, sounds pretty scary, I also love the fact that he is anxious, it really fits the situation.
Only thing I question, is how they heard the guitar clearly, as I thought it was just him that could be heard, not objects and other things, which begs the question whether that was intentional or possibly a gap/silence to leave an air of mysticism.
Either way, awesome job man/ma'am.
Date: July 19 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
I did not expect a tiny guitar to show up. But it improved the story. Wonder if he (and us) will ever find out where these things are comming from. Wonder what or surprises are in store.
Author's Response:
It improved the story?
I just added in that part mostly because I really enjoy playing guitar and one of my fantasies is to play songs for a giantess. I'll be honest, when I wrote it out I assumed everyone's reaction would be to say 'Goddammit. He turned the story into another High School Musical. How stupid can you get?'
Thank you for sticking with the story for as long as you have, and your comments are encouragement whenever I don't feel like writing. I'll try and answer as many questions as I can when I decide to rap this story up.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Was that dream Peter had an omen of what's to come or just a bad dream? I think dropping him in ice cream last chapter was kind of a dick move, especially since they don't know if his body retains heat the same way as a normal human and he could have gotten frostbite or something...But other than that the girls have been pretty good to him.
Im eager to find out what happens next and WHO the mastermind behind all this is!
Author's Response:
Who says there is a mastermind? . . . . Dun Dun Duuuuuuuuuun