Reviewer: hertinypal Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 7:56 PM Title: Report 5: The Lindon Family, Interview 2: Claire Lindon and Corey Lindon

Jack! I cant believe how many reviews you have. You are very popular. I really like this story and your idea. I especially enjoyed the claire and corey story and look forward to seeing more of them.

I imagine with so many reviews, you arent desperate for more fans but you got one so I figured I would let you know that I am enjoying your work. I love comments on my stories so I figured that it was only right for me to send kudos to you after enjoying it.

I look foreard to more installments and I hope you will read my new story and comment on it? If you have the time.

hertinypal

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing! I'm glad you like the story. And if you want to see more of Claire and Corey, I suggest keeping an eye out for Ackbar's name, since he's going to be expanding their story at some point.  I will check out your new story when I get a chance; I've enjoyed your past works.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 10:10 AM Title: Report 5: The Lindon Family, Interview 2: Claire Lindon and Corey Lindon

Call me cynical. But, the Lindons sound more like an exception to a gradually--and frighteningly--changing rule.

Author's Response:

I'd probably sooner call you realistic in this case than cynical.

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 7:04 AM Title: Report 5: The Lindon Family, Interview 2: Claire Lindon and Corey Lindon

I think the take away from all this is it depends on the personalities an relationships of the people involved.  Most of the last households or univerities studied were run by powerful, selfish women where the relationships between them and their charges weren't that good to begin with.  What we see from the Lindon household is a well adjusted, loving family that cares more for the future of their children then themselves.  Shrink Act criminals shouldn't just be placed in their homes without first evaluating nature of their relationships with their wardens and the environment they are going into.  This comes back to main issue with the Shrink Act.  Far too much power is given to people that could cause great harm to their charges.  In some of these cases, there were no firm end to the incareration, just a perioditic review, which the warden can skew to keep their prisoners shrunk indefinately.

Still good writing and a good mix of GTS elements.

Author's Response:

You're very right about the shaky ethics of who has the power in the Shrink Act, and it's actually something that's going to be heavily addressed next chapter.  Thanks for reading!